just ignore my last review it turns out i have read it before :P
this is good but i get the feeling ive already read parts of it before. ah well. i loved it!
ooo good story! if you need anyone to proof-read any other vchapters just ask me!!!
This is great! You should continue it, that would be so awesome of you! : )
I love how you ended it before they went down to talk. It leaves us room for our imaginations to put everything together and play out what could have happened after that. Great Work!
Very nice. I like it.
This was awesome!!!!!!!!
First review! This is a really good story. I can't wait to read the rest. The only thing I have is try to make it a wee bit clearer when there's a flshback. My little mind was a bit confused at first ;) Other than that your story's great.