Reviews For All Grown Up
Reviewer: Gersknightlady
Date: 09/17/08 15:09
Chapter: The Trial

Kel story, love to see that in some writers opinions Harry and the malfoy's can and do "grow up". I get tired of Harry ranting and raving years after. Good work

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Bewitching
Date: 12/23/07 19:52
Chapter: The Trial

I ver much enjoyed this story, I liked how you showed that a person can look past what they know of someone off the bat. Your character being a woman, Harry testifying for Lucius and Lucius actually being thankful for it are all great examples. I think the one thing that bothered me was when Harry was holding back tears. I just have never imagined Harry to be the crying in public type. He has spoken about his parents before calmly. But other than that, I think the story was absolutely amazing. (I wouldn't even have mentioned it if we weren't required to say something we didn't like. It was that small of a thing).

Author's Response: Heh, I appreciate that you mentioned it anyways. I think that I'm proudest of this fic, so it means a lot to me when people like it. And thank you for leaving such a nice review - I always appreciate getting them and this one just made my holidays a little more cheery. Thank you! :D

Reviewer: hpobsessed4ever_23
Date: 09/29/07 10:27
Chapter: The Trial

nice fanfic.

Author's Response: Why, thank you very much for the review. :D

Reviewer: BloodRayne
Date: 09/26/07 12:35
Chapter: The Trial

I really liked this story; the way you weaved all this without straying from canon. I loved that Harry was the witness, because that is very true to his character: he is a fair and honest person.

Your story made me shiver in the right parts (the kind of goosebumps you get when you read something really, really touching), such as when Harry testified for Lucius Malfoy, not against. I did think Lucius slightly OOC for crying; I don't believe he would ever allow himself to lose control like that, but never mind.

Basically, I loved it, and the idea that Lucius remained a Death Eater to protect his family is perfect, because it's very likely and I believe it is completely true. Wonderful, wonderful story, Kelly!

Author's Response: Hadeer! *huggles fellow SBBC-er* thank you so much leaving me a great review!

I enjoyed writing it, actually. Especially the part where Harry testifies. It was tons of fun!

Ou, about those tears....yeah, they were the vestiges left over from my very old ending. Originally, Lucius was going to cry and confess all to Harry outside of the courtroom. Somehow, though, the story was rejected for being too OOC (gee...obviously). So, yeah, those were my one little throwback to the old ending. But, anyways, I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much. Thanks again!

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/21/07 14:01
Chapter: The Trial

Hmmmm... I don't think it likely that Lucius only joined the Death Eaters to protect his family, but I did like this story.

Author's Response: The way I see it, Lucuis joined the Death Eaters because he wanted to. However, he only remained a Death Eater to protect his family. For the sake of self-preservation, I think he would have left years ago. However, since his family was threatened, he stayed.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, though. That was my goal!

Reviewer: Senritsu
Date: 09/03/07 21:07
Chapter: The Trial

Shmerg-san said to thank you for the idea of Voldepookie needing the "evilest" of all ice creams. Thank you!

Also, this story is absolutely brilliant and original. Such a lovely style that is, what we in the art world would call "soft", like pastels. The wording is easy to read but clever and the way Mr. Malfoy could just be so civil... it puts a whole new light on him.

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah that was my prompt. But Schmergo gets all of the credit for creating another masterpiece!

And thank you for leaving me a lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 09/01/07 12:03
Chapter: The Trial

Hey Kelly!

We finally checked into a hotel with internet connection [I'm on vacation], yours was the first story I checked--and I'm happy I did! I absolutely love your story! =]]]] Harry's testimony was very real and touching, and I loved how you put in the little details about a female attorney in a predominently male field. Your writing style is absolutely wonderful--it's friendly and personal, but has a distinctly professional touch. And the ended was just awwww.

So yeah.. Overall, this was an absolutely wonderful fic, and I loved it! Best of luck on the challenge!

*hugs* Fennnnnn

Author's Response: Awwww! Fenn, my smile is basically jumping off my face right now! You leave such great reviews!! I feel honored that you went to find my story while on vacation (and I understand the lack of internet in hotels - I had three weeks once without connection *shudders*). Thank you for leaving such a wonderful review - my day is infinitely better. And good luck to you as well in the challenge!!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 08/30/07 13:47
Chapter: The Trial

That was rather nice... I enjoyed your characterization on all parts. Write on!

Author's Response: Thanks again for being my first (and second, heh) reviewer!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 08/30/07 13:47
Chapter: The Trial

That was rather nice... I enjoyed your characterization on all parts. Write on!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! The story has been feeling a tad neglected, lol. And I'm pleased that you enjoyed the characterization - I had to rewrite bits to keep everyone (especially Lucius) in character.

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