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Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 01/03/09 15:43
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i really liked this. i love your style of writing, it flows and allows a lot of are one of my favourite mugglenet authors.

Reviewer: laceymoibella
Date: 12/16/07 19:32
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Brilliant story. I loved how you insinuated the forbidden Dark Magic book into your fic as a means of how Tom, a.k.a. Voldemort, was opened to more ideas for the Dark Arts. As well as how he may have furthered his practice of the use of Dark Arts; which of course became his signature.

I liked how you gave some doubt to young Tom as to whether or not he should go through with finding out how to create a Horcux. And, that you filled in the gap as to how he possibly came to ask Professor Slughorn for that info.

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Reviewer: professorhead123
Date: 09/05/07 10:19
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great...really great...fantastic

Author's Response: Thank you, professorhead123.


Reviewer: to_the_stage93
Date: 08/25/07 22:30
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Wow, this was a very intruiging fic with a very original premise, I've never read one like this before. You did a great job with it!!!! However, although I love the metaphorical summary, and I think it is so well written, it would probably be better if the summary was less vague. Anyway, I still think this a great fic, I love how you wove the theme throughout the story, it really gave good insight into Tom Riddle. Great job!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Alli. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it.

As for the summary, I know it's a bit vague, and I usually don't do that very often; this fic just didn't seem like it wanted to be a more detailed summary. But I'm glad to hear you liked the woven theme!


Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 08/25/07 18:46
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You've shown his ambition very nicely. Great start!

Author's Response: Thanks, Pissenoffanis.


Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 08/25/07 18:25
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I love how you portrayed Tom Riddle—he's perfectly ambitious, arrogant and intelligent. I love how you included him first learning of Horcruxes, since that must have been a huge turning point in his life. Great fic!!


Author's Response: Thank you so very much, Alison. I'm thrilled to hear you thought young Tom Riddle's character worked.


Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 08/25/07 18:20
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It was quite enjoyable. Very well written, too! Good job...this was totally Kudos-worthy!

Author's Response: Thanks, cutiepoet. Glad you liked it.


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