Reviewer: Ravenclaw Goddess
Date: 08/27/07 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Luna is my favorite character of all time!

Author's Response: Mine to!

Reviewer: osier
Date: 08/26/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

haha!

Author's Response: I take it you liked it. Thanks for the reveiw.

Reviewer: imnotajackal
Date: 08/26/07 12:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

She is right about recognizing Krum, I didn't pick up on that on my own though so maybe most people won't notice.

Author's Response: Yes, I made a bit of a mistake there, didn't I? I like your idea of people not noticing, that might be nice. Though with my luck, its improbable ( :

Reviewer: to_the_stage93
Date: 08/26/07 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was so good! I've never read one like this, and I really liked the insight into Luna's character, especially the end with Krum. However, I think that Luna would have recognized Krum because of the Triwizard Tournament (if she recognized Fleur, she should recognize Krum, even if she isn't into professional Quidditch) however, you still did a great job and Luna's thoughts sounded just like I would imagine they would, based on canon dialogue!!!! Fabulous job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I do realize, now that you point it out, that Luna probably would have reconized Krum, but I think I'll hold off on editing that in. For the sake of it, I can think of two reason why her not reconizing him might work- 1) she might have knew Fleur a slight bit better, due to the Beauxbatons students sitting at the Ravenclaw table, and 2) Ron makes a comment on Krum having grown a beard, so he might not be as reconizable. I might change my mind latter, though. Thanks so much for your imput!

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