It's a good concept. Great idea. But you lost me a lot. You were a little choppy with the plot and didn't really flesh out what was going on. Sometimes I didn't know who was talking, or even why Draco was acting the way he was. Good start.
umm kinda boring,
okay no, itisso BORING.
Really great story. You should write more!
really really really really really really good write another one your stories are brillant
OMG Your writing is amazing!
I hope you continue w/ this wonderful story!
what is this hes dead! definately not kool.. I'm done reading
interesting not draco at all
*Blinks* Wow! That was, *Pauses* different, then most storys. Awesome! It was really Out There!! It was like, *Pauses* Olca! (just a word i use.)! It had so many surprises! Props! A 10!
HOW CUTE! I loved that! it was such an amazing story! congrats!
not bad.... but still good u know... is this the end????
good story. keep it up.
wow, thats a lot to take in at one time! i really like it though, its very original. cant wait for more.
wow! now i understand! it was really good, i liked it alot!
This is a great fic. Sad and very angst ridden, I must say, but those are two things that go well together. Can't wait for chapter four!
I'm glad I don't know where you're going with this story . . . It keeps me wondering and wanting more. Keep the mystery up as long as possible.
its so sad, but not at the same time. I dont know. I do know that I like it tho. Are thoes song lyrics in it? and if so are they all the same song or different? cant wait for more.
Author's Response: It's all from the same CD, Keane's Hopes & Fears.
this was interesting, i dunno where youre going, but it's interesting. update soon.
Wow! I didn´t expect that to happen! It´s very good! Well described!