Reviews For Merlyn's Story
Reviewer: star_sailor
Date: 07/10/08 0:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was nice! I always like stories that portray the canon incidents at a different angle. And Merlyn personality fits nicely. It's also refreshing to hear from the Hufflepuffs; they never get enough credit. I just wish it was a tad longer! I really enjoyed it - you did quite a good job.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I would have liked to make it a bit longer, but it was a school assignment (as in, for my RL school) and there was a cap on our word counts. Yesh, I liked experimenting with a Puff, too! :D

Thanks for the review!

~Phia

Reviewer: xxshaexx
Date: 12/04/07 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

kewl


Author's Response: Thanks Shae! Or are you Nikki?

Reviewer: MaiaMadness
Date: 09/04/07 7:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Are you really 13? This is absolutely brilliant. I very much enjoyed this story, despite it now being AU.

You have Owen Cauldwell's name wrong in one place; you call him Alberich instead.

I do find it a little bit implausible that he'd remember everything Ron and Ginny and Neville said to such detail, but that's a minor thing.

Apart from that, your language is excellent, and your characters function very well. I like Merlyn. Especially her name, it's a nice play on Merlin, which is obvious but still good.

Well done! I really enjoyed this fic. :) Cookie and a gold star for you!

Maia

Author's Response: Wow, Maia, thankyou so much! Yes, I am thirteen, but not for much longer =) *headdesk* I originally had Owen's character played by a boy named Alberich, so I'm not surprised that happened. Will fix. Again, thankyou so very much, this is probably my nicest review (excluding ones from my amazing beta) that I've ever had! Thankyou! Phia

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 08/30/07 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Heehee! I love Merlyn!

Author's Response: Thanks Crows! She was dead boring until she acquired her alter ego! I tried to get her talking like Fred and George, but I discovered that it's harder than it looks. I'm so glad you like her!

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 08/30/07 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

*squeeeeee*

*loves*

*is so happy for you that this finally got through*

*flees before Phia hits her for this pointless review* :D

Author's Response: Hit you? Hit YOU? Never! Thanks for leaving that review, gave me warm fuzzies. I love being able to rely on getting at least one review for my fics!

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