wow El I loves it ^.^ thanks for the comment on my story. I love the way you've written this, it's very unique congrats on the briliant stroy n.n
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I was so worried about the style that I had written this story. I thought that maybe it was a little too strange, o its just fantastic to hear that you like it! Don't worry about the review for your fic, it was fantastic hun! Thank you so so much for your review it's just great to hear that people like it! Thank you again, Ell
Such an interesting peice. I have to admit it is a bit strange to read and think that I, myself, am the one experiencing this. I do like your writing style though. It is quite unique, and the whole time I could visualize everything in my head.
I really like it and if we could rate stories here, I'd give this an awesome 100/100! It was fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like the style that I've written it in, I though it would be interesting to try and get the reader to visualise the events rather than just reading about them - I'm so so glad you thought it worked! Thank you so much for your compliments as well, it's so nice of you to review this and you've written such fantastic comments as well 100/100 Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! Seriously, Thanks!
Um. Yeah, will you marry me? XD Seriously this is fucking AMAZING. I feel too inferior now XD But my god, you're good.
Author's Response: Um, I'm single so yes I'd love to! Wow! Thank you so much for your review - you shouldn't feel inferior though! Literally reading this review has just made my day and its been very bad up until now! Thank you so much though! You think it's amazing, wow! Thank you so so much! Honestly, you are fantastic! **hugs**
Brilliant writing saw a few mistakes but you can forget that because this story makes you feel so many emotions. A story of love, escape and many more and it's noly very short
I'm still trying to work out who the two people are. Ron and Hermione? Harry and Ginny. Remus and Tonks? or am i way off.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Your comments are really encouraging and it's fantastic to hear what people think! Your not actually way off - I left the question of who open as I didn't want to limit what people thought (if that makes any sense). I liked the way that people could all interpret it differently. Thank you so much for leaving your review. It is very much appreciated!
*points at WracksupurtGirl* I know her ;) He he, you're great Ell, I LOVE this peice, that language is beautiful and it's so haunting and... and just great! I love it :) So glad you finally published it! :D *hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you Myth! I can't believe your my seventh review! Thank you for being so nice and for encouraging m to publish this - it really wouldn't be here if you hadn't have told me that it wasn't utter rubbish! Thank you so much for being so nice to me and leaving such a great review. Thanks.
Author's Response: *hugs back*
wow....wonderful writing! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so worried about the style and its fantastic to hear that you like it. Thank you so much for leaving a review for this!
Hmm... it makes me think of some female (maybe Hermione?) attempting suicide at the ocean (Shell Cottage?), only to be saved by the man she loves (Ron?).
(or is it Ginny and Harry?)
Very poingant, though.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Yes, it was based on a woman and a man but she wasn't trying to kill herself and she intends to live ... it was just to escape. I left the question of who open so that I could hear what people thought and how they interpreted it so thank you for leaving your thoughts on who it was. Thanks.
I liked it. You're very good with imagery and building suspense.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, I was woried that it might bore the reader so its fantastic to hear that you like it! Thank you so so much for your review!
nice. very, very dark. i like it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! YES - you like it! I'm smiling so much, I hardly know what to write! Thank you so much for taking the time to review this for me and also for being so complimentary. I 'm so glad that people like this and it's just so fantastic to get such great reviews. Thank you so much!
lovely!!! absolutely lovely!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It's so nice! I was really worried when I submited it that people wouldn't like it, and it took quite a bit of convincing from my friend beofre I did so. Thank you so much! It's great to hear that people like it! Thank you for reviewing my fic and leaving such a great review -Thanks!
who is talking
and who are they talking about?
I dont get it
unless i no
Author's Response: No thatís fine! My idea was based on two characters from the books. I know who I based the idea on but I thought I would leave the question of who open to the reader so donít worry as I left out who they were on purpose. Originally I based my idea on Lily and James and how closely they knew each other and also the way that the war had forced them into difficult situations. As I say though, that sounded a little lame and non-canon, so I left the question of who up to the reader as it could apply to quite a lot of the couples in the series. It really could be anyone, and thatís why I wrote it in this style, I thought it would make it more interesting! Thank you so much for your review though, your my first reviewer so thank you :)