It's just so sad! She's chatting with James right after she stopped being friends with Severus! You did a marvelous job expressing the feelings Severus felt, even though it's Lily's POV. I also liked how James didn't really push her, just said "Okay... Evans."
Augh!!!!!!! I want Snape and Lily together!!!!!!! Please, someone, do it!
I loved it! I totally noticed that the dialogue was related to music, but it wasn't really that cheesy. It worked for Lily's character! :) now write a fic that actually allows Sev and Lily to stay together! *chuckles* This is my challenge really to anyone who reads this review!
Sad but sweet. They had to finally grow apart somehow or another.
I love this fic. I wonder what Snape would have been like if he and Lily had at least stayed friends. Maybe he wouldn't have disregarded Harry so much for being James' son. (cuz I truly think that Snape didn't hate Harry. I think he cared for him, and he just couldn't show Harry that cuz then he would have lower standards and be more vulnerable than he already is.) I like how you used the song from HSM2, cuz that is probably what Sev and Lily's live got to be after he became interested in the Dark Arts.
poor snape... i feel so bad for him... he really did genuinely love lily, and potter was a git and i don't like him after deathly hallows.
Great story. Now every time I hear "gotta go my own way", I picture Snape and Lily instead of Troy and Gabriella.
oh my god, that was so cute! i kept singing the song in my head. i was practically crying, i just loved it!
Interesting. I never really thought that Lily actually loved Snape, but this story made me think about it a different way.
Annie--this is so good! Normally I don't read Snape/Lily storries, but I just had to read your newest story! I'm glad I did--It's marvelous and full of surprises! I'm a big fan of yours--please continue writing!
I liked the Idea of this story, and you really used the song well. The only thing that bugged me, was that they kept rhyming (sort of unnatural) and I kept on seeing flickers of HSM2, which made me cringe, as I hate Zac Efron, and HSM2. HSM was ok thouhg. Sorry if you're a fan.
awww i love this song from hs2!!!! good story!!!=D
I really, REALLY liked it!!! Plus, this is my favorite song from HSM2...
aww cute!! i love that song too. i feel so sorry for snape.
it almost made me cry :'(
but it was such a good fic
It was cute. I was close to tears during the exchange between Lily and Sev; it was written so well!
AWESOMENESS. i love this, good. reallly good. (: write more, sweetest sin is the best though. :D
I like this a lot.
Oh, poor Snape. :( *feels like crying* You shouldn't leave this a one shot - write more! :) 10/10
You mixed two of my favorite things: Harry Potter and High School Musical. You win at life. :)
Author's Response: LOL, Candace. I just sat here for at least five minutes and tried to figure out why someone else had your username on MNFF. Then I had the brains to click on it and look at your profile and confirm that it was you :P And thank you!