i like it, but i think you need to add more chapters like where it leads and stuff...
lol funny!!! i love this story!! great job!!keep up the great work!!!=D
That was soooooo sweeeeeeeet. What can I say, I am an utter and complete sucker for fluff. Not to mention a dehard Lily/James shipper.
The whole time I was reading this, I had a goofy grin on my face( still do as a matter of fact )so good job.I hope to see more fics like this from you in the near future.=Sammy
Ha. That was a very interesting story. It reminds me of one I read about Ron and Hermione which I can't recall at the moment, but it was a very cute fic, although I don't think it should have been rated 6th-7th years. It really wasnt that inappropriate. But still, regardless, I liked it. Keep writing!
Sirius looked back at Lily. “Yes?”
“Thanks for being in your bed last night,” Lily smiled.
Aww, how sweet!
thi should have been in he james/lily category. cute story though. i like the title
lol, wonderful work!
i really really like it, but i think it would fit better in the James/Lilly catigory...
Teehee! Good job.
i loved it! it was unexpected that she would make the first move but understnding as james hadnt tried anything, nice one-piece!
Hahaha. Very cute. Great job!