funny, *cringes at the mary sue-ness*
i hope that isn't the end, because that was a good story
You dont spell it "Marti Gras," it's "Mardi Gras." It's a cool story though!!!
It was wierd how james was made out to be the bad guy,but Sirius one of the good guys. Still good, though.
Seven of Diamonds has the whole story (and the sequel) on FF.net if any of the readers want to view it. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1975275/1/
Ehh? are you gonna write nemore?
Way to skewer the Mary Sues! Love it!
weird story, i´ve never felt sorry for Snape, but good nonetheless, since i love new characters.