Reviewer: this_is_the_life
Date: 03/20/10 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

this was really good! Even I was not satisfied with the amount that was written about lilyn james in DH. This was soething that filled in the gap well, to say the very least!!!!Hats off to you!!

Reviewer: pottermagic
Date: 07/23/09 15:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm glad Harry was able to have closure on his feelings for his father. I hadn't really thought about it before, but you are right: He was left with very confusing thoughts about his dad after seeing Snape's memories and it wasn't dealt with in the book.

Reviewer: Harry4Ginny
Date: 11/16/07 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, that's amazing :)
The only thing is, I think Harry was being honest in DH...but I like the way you did it anyway :)

Reviewer: Suika07
Date: 10/23/07 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

omg, this was so beautiful. very well done, it definitally gave a sense of closure and completeness i had been looking for! :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/10/07 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* good story!! yeah, i was wondering about that too. that was a major gap in the story!!

Reviewer: NikaDawson
Date: 09/09/07 4:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good story. I really liked it. Lily/James is still one of my favorite couples, and no offense to the pairing, but I never liked Lily/Snape.

Reviewer: voldy_mort
Date: 09/02/07 14:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Real Nice!!!! :)

Reviewer: voldy_mort
Date: 09/02/07 14:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

Real Nice!!!! :)

Reviewer: lilypotter93
Date: 08/31/07 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was beautiful. It actually brought tears to my eyes. Great job! :)

Reviewer: Lilys Passion
Date: 08/31/07 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I actually cried. (that's not actually saying much because i cried when Dobby died.) Even though this was in your mind, I felt like it was J.K.Rowling writing!!!

~Lilys Passion

Reviewer: Lilys Passion
Date: 08/31/07 16:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

I actually cried. (that's not actually saying much because i cried when Dobby died.) Even though this was in your mind, I felt like it was J.K.Rowling writing!!!

~Lilys Passion

Reviewer: Aura_light
Date: 08/31/07 4:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! It's really amazing.... Great job!

Reviewer: rowenaravenclaw1
Date: 08/30/07 19:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

awesome!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 08/30/07 14:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW. It was really well written. I especially like the ending.

Good work!

Reviewer: RonsGirlAKAHermione
Date: 08/30/07 10:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was...beautiful. Really

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/30/07 2:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Yes! Yes, yes, yes! THIS has been the question that's been bothering me ever since I read DH! I just thought that was so sad about Snape, yet I couldn't help thinking it was a bit creepy. I mean rreeallyy you aren't going to stay all cool and composed after you've found out this greasy slimy git that you've hated most of you life with a burning passion ended up having the hots for your mother! I mean, I don't know what I would do. And as for James, well, I was wondering what James would say if Snape went to Lily 'after death' and confessed his undying love for her.

I think you wrote this really, really well. I mean, sure Harry wouldn't really lie to Dumbledore and go back, but for fanfiction you are at liberty to make a few perks. So what's unique about this one is that Harry gets to actually interact with his parents instead of looking through a pensieve or whatever.

Once again, wonder fic, two thumbs up! I really didn't mean to sound like a suck-up or anything but I was just SO HAPPY that someone wrote a fic about the things that have been bothering me! Thank you!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/29/07 10:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

This brought tears to my eyes. I really don't think Harry would go back for the ring, but I agree that Jo left this question really open. Everything we have seen points that Lily would never have chosen James, but still she did. I love your answer to that question. :) Cyns

Reviewer: Katie jeanne
Date: 08/28/07 16:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

More please! You really are a good writer! ANd I loved that joke about the mirror. Excellent!

Reviewer: Kathyhermy123
Date: 08/28/07 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a very good fic, but I have to warn you that the mods don't like multiple category submissions or fics being submitted to the 'Romance' cat, instead of a sub-cat. My advice is to get this into James/Lily or General, fast.

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 08/28/07 5:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

An excellent explanation on everything that we missed in Deathly Hallows. Well done! Your writing style is wonderful and really draws the reader (or at least me) into the story. Wonderful =)

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