I love Neville's character - (I'm a Luna Neville shipper). I love the way you've written Neville's thoughts and his discription on the trio. Its nice to see the 'main' characters from someone elses point of view. Personally though i thinkn luna and neville are the two main characters for me! lol
I love the description that you have put in this!
awe. very good but sad :[ i've always felt bad for neville.
Aww poor Neville. That's so sad. I never really thought about how lonely he must be. =[
Beautifully written story =]
what a heart-wrenching story! you've just captured a sad yet illuminating facet of neville, the unsung hero! thank God for trevor, indeed... :)