hhmmmmmm.... interesting... I will reserve judgement for when I know more....

are you going to update,this story is awesome !!!!

Ohhhh! This has the potential to be amazing! Please write more. It's REALLY original.

Hello, Jamie.

You should know that I absolutely adore this prologue, as I have told you.

You should also know I feel really bad I never actually checked to see it it went up.

My bad.
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This prologue is absolutely amazing. While the idea of Harry having a twin sister - or any sister - I find a bit of a cliché, you're doing a fantastic job writing it - your writing is superb. ;-) I absolutely love Gertrude's POV. It's different, as she's only one I believe, and you portrayed that well.

The writing from Dumbledore's POV was amazing, as well. It put across its message simply and with care. Meaning it made sense and read well and sounded natural. *winks*

And for some reason unfathomable to me, this line is my favorite:

Gertrude liked Harry. He was fun to play with.

Ah, she's so lucky. She hadn't realized the horrors going on around her. Innocence.

Again, I'm really sorry I never checked for this...but I absolutely love it. Like I said before.

-Kate


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Kate! Dont' feel bad for not checking. I don't often check for new stories on my friends' profiles. :o Thanks for all the compliments. I also enjoyed writing from Gertrude's POV. It was fun to try to write like a one-year-old would think. :D Thanks again! *huggles*

Great start its a really intreiging idea. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks. Hopefully, I will be able to get past my writer's block soon.

I really lke how you have started off the chapter. I will keep reading.


Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hope you do keep reading. Thanks for the review!

i can't wait to see what happens next. i love the kind of fics about harry having a sister!

Author's Response: Well, I never even thought of writing a story about Harry having a sister before one of my friends told me to. It's turning out to be a really great plot line, I think. Thanks for the review!

That was really great. Can't wait for the rest of it.

Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter should be up soon. It's with my beta. :)

hey nice story. I don't really get it all, but i think it will come at the next chapter. How did think of the name gertrude?
Well keep posting it's a good first chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think you'll understand it in the next chapter. It was sort of hard to follow, I guess. I got the name 'Gertrude' from a challenger. Someone told me to write this story and to use the name Gertrude. Thanks for the review!