Reviewer: theonlymarauderette
Date: 07/08/08 22:12
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Prongsie you rule! you're story was brillant and the characters were so themselves. I loved Sirius and James and Lily too. Please write and post more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really apologize for not updating in a while but I promise I will!

Reviewer: halfbloodseeker
Date: 10/20/07 21:05
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

hi prong! that was a really cool beginning and i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. cya

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm really happy you liked it!

Reviewer: looneys
Date: 09/19/07 21:18
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

nice! i cant wait to read the next one :]

and btw, im just your age! well 15, but i was born in 92 which is what drew me to your username haha

im new too, and didnt think id could start writing but your story gives me some hope

take care!

Author's Response: Haha! Yes, I was born in 92, the best year to be born in! GO '92 BABIES! I'm glad this story inspired you! I want to see stories under your name; I'm sure you're a great writer. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: silleri
Date: 09/16/07 5:05
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

keep on writing!!!!=)

Author's Response: I promise I'm working on! I've just been so busy. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/29/07 19:48
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Ooh, what a great beginning! I am definitely looking forward to seeing how this story turns out. You got them all perfectly. Naughty Sirius must be a lot of fun to write. I personally enjoy writing Remus, but that's fairly obvious. Hilarious beginning, great writing...this story defintely has promise. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Sorry I took long to respond! Anyways, thank you! I'm soooooo happy you liked it! I really LOVE writing Remus and Sirius because I just always imagined Sirius as this annoying git and Remus as the sensible, mature Marauder out of the four. So their personalities would sometimes clash and they'd end up having these hilarious arguments. Remus always with the logic and reason and Sirius simply refusing to give in even though he knows Remus is right. Thanks again!

Reviewer: ShotaandRemus4eva
Date: 08/29/07 10:18
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Lol, I love Sirius!!
You portray him so well

Author's Response: Thank you! I love Sirius too!

Reviewer: Siriusly Mr Black
Date: 08/27/07 4:39
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Cool! Definantly adding it to my favorites! Well done, and update soon. I'll even say the magic word: Imperio. There, now you have to

Author's Response: Thanks again, I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Siriusly Mr Black
Date: 08/27/07 4:37
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Cool! Definantly adding it to my favorites! Well done, and update soon. I'll even say the magic word: Imperio. There, now you have to

Author's Response: Are you sure you want to put the Imperius Curse on me? You could go to Azkaban for using it. Thank you so much and I really am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: N_ReadeR
Date: 08/25/07 18:00
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

its funny =)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 08/24/07 14:43
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Great start. I can't wait for the rest of the story :]

"What happens under the cloak?"
"I don't know, because it stays there!"
Ha, that was great.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 08/23/07 15:19
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

*groans* Sirius you IDIOT! What does he have against James and Lily dating? Why can't he just LET THEM BE?! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 08/23/07 15:18
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

*groans* Sirius you IDIOT! What does he have against James and Lily dating? Why can't he just LET THEM BE?! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Haha, he doesn't really have anything against them. He just wants to annoy them, being the annoying git he is! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sorry_22
Date: 08/23/07 12:22
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

it's really really good! i'm so proud of you Prongsie!!! oh and Remus's comebacks are.....umm. how should i say it? well written? w/e. they made me laugh!

Author's Response: LILY! Thanks for leaving me a review and I'm extremely glad you liked it!

Reviewer: fizzingwhizbee_2
Date: 08/22/07 22:49
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I am too! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 08/22/07 21:06
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Prongs!!! *Tackle huggles*. Yesss, it got on the site, I'm so proud of you! We make such a great team, eh? Lots of love!!!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: YAY! Victoria, my awesome Beta reader! Thank you again for all of your help!

Reviewer: water_polo_08
Date: 08/22/07 17:05
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Ha. I like it. Somehow I can't see Lily just saying "I'd love to" but I guess that it had to happen somehow.


Author's Response: Yeah, in reality she probably wouldn't have simply agreed like that, but that's not the main point of the story so that's why I didn't go into detail about it. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 08/22/07 16:24
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

update!! i can't wait to see what happens ..i hope sirius doesn't ruin their date too much..if you can make it sooo fluffy sirius wants to throw up..

Author's Response: Haha, Sirius WANTS to see the fluff so he can bother James about it! Thanks for reviewing and I'll try to update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 08/22/07 16:12
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

Please update this as soon as possible, I thought it was brilliant! You did a great job. It was really well written, and it made me laugh, especially Sirius - he's such a pain, but I love him anyway :) I can't wait to find out what happens - keep writing!

Author's Response: I'm working on the second chapter where they actually follow Lily and James under the cloak. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

Reviewer: SilverLily_13
Date: 08/22/07 15:38
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

This is a good story. I can't wait to see what happens, so update soon! Sirius' character is really good!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try to update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 08/22/07 15:32
Chapter: What Happens Under the Cloak...

oh merlin... A lighting bolt,please

Author's Response: What do you mean by that? lol

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