keep writing? Please? I love it.
Not meaning to sound like a snob, but the ray of hope analogies, particularly at the end, were a little clishe. I hope I didn't hurt your feelings.
I'll definately continue reading this one! Are you going to continue the story of Amy and her brother?
Excellent beginjning! I can't wait for more. You have me thoroughly intrigued. Keep up the good work ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Very intriguing...I think you described a Death-Eater-ruled world nicely. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always wondered what it would've been like if Voldemort won the first war, so this idea popped into my head one day, and that's how the story was born.