Reviewer: harry potter lovee
Date: 01/20/11 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

sounds good! keep it up!

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 11/17/07 16:50
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

Ooh cliffhanger.

Reviewer: Danni_darling
Date: 09/09/07 23:46
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

It's great as always! A couple of grammatical mistakes, though, but nothing you can't fix. Anyway keep up the greatness. Can't wait to read the next chap!

Reviewer: Lily_Friend
Date: 09/07/07 18:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

this is me MWAHAHAHAHA
love it as i said. the previous reveiw sounds weird doesnt it? hmmmm

Reviewer: Lily_Friend
Date: 09/07/07 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

JAMIE!!!!!!
(a lop sided sprint to a girl who always needed saving)
Great like i said before . .when you showed it to me. you should get our Texas Friend to review

Reviewer: Aura_light
Date: 09/02/07 1:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

Good chapter. waiting to find out what Sirius's drastic action is.

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 09/01/07 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

Check spelling and tense, otherwise, good!

Reviewer: Lily Elegance
Date: 09/01/07 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

This is a great start to your first fan fic, I can't wait to find out what Sirius' 'action, drastic action' is!
Keep on writing!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 09/01/07 14:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

Good chapter!

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/01/07 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

oooo i like it! great start the writing is amazing! you did a great job on the characters too! i cant wait for the next chapter so dont be one of those people who updates once every 5 months!!!!!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/01/07 10:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

Nice.

Reviewer: lily16
Date: 09/01/07 10:07
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

i love how you jumped into the plot at the begining, instead of making us wait. i also liked how Lily woke up on her desk. you also write really well- the words kinda flow. can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: rawrspence
Date: 09/01/07 9:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

WRITE SOME MORE!! ^^ IT WAS AWEEESOME : D

Reviewer: rawrspence
Date: 09/01/07 9:48
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Boys are Not Hungry

WRITE SOME MORE!! ^^ IT WAS AWEEESOME : D

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