Reviews For Getting The Girl
Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 08/17/10 0:49
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Aw. I laughed out loud a couple of times. This was so, so sweet. He made himself ill when trying to work up the nerve to propose/commit. Teehee.

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 01/18/09 11:05
Chapter: Getting The Girl

so hows the next chapter coming?

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 12/29/08 11:31
Chapter: Getting The Girl

yeah he always makes me laugh!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad!!

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 12/28/08 13:48
Chapter: Getting The Girl

yay!! sirius is probs one of my most favoritest character in the book!!

Author's Response: Mine too!

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 07/17/08 15:12
Chapter: Getting The Girl

AWWWWWWww!!! *hugs and kisses and aww*

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/19/08 15:42
Chapter: Getting The Girl

OK, Arabian Princess?! That is sooo cheesy! But good! It is hilarious!
I love how Lily thinks James is gonna break it off! It's funny to see that she immediately thinks he's making a speech and about to break up. But when I heard the line "We've been together for two years now," I knew that James was gonna propose. I also suspected this when James was late because, of course, boys will be boys and wait to buy the ring at the last second. Haha!
Write more!

Author's Response: Ahaha, yes, the Arabian Princess thing was a bit lame, I'll admit it. But it just seemed like something James/Sirius would come up with, and Lily being new to the Wizarding World may kind of (sort of) believe. I'm glad you liked it though!

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 03/09/08 17:51
Chapter: Getting The Girl

i love it! The part about the Arabian princess made me fall off the chair from laughter. and I liked the ending and the ine "potter" "what" "no, its lilly evens potter"

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione_Ginny_Ron_Harry
Date: 10/05/07 21:57
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Awwww! that was so sweet!!! i loved it! :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Abelinda Malfoy
Date: 09/30/07 15:22
Chapter: Getting The Girl


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 09/27/07 18:08
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Ahh. You gotta love James and Lily.. Arabian Princess?! I LAUGHED SO HARD! I just love your writing... I also loved the part in the end where it's like the younger version of James and Lily. so sweet. =D

Author's Response: Hehe! Thank you!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 09/09/07 11:01
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Oh. Wow. That was AMAZING!! Loved it!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: DracosBaby_232
Date: 09/07/07 17:12
Chapter: Getting The Girl

This is a really good story. I really envy Lily (lucky little witch)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, me too.

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 09/06/07 17:13
Chapter: Getting The Girl

hmmm... it seemed like Lily was a little dull not to pick up on what was going on... but I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for all your fics.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I guess I was hoping to make her less-dim by showing why she thinks the worst. Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 09/05/07 14:32
Chapter: Getting The Girl

This was fantastic! Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: prongs_babe_317426
Date: 09/04/07 18:29
Chapter: Getting The Girl

oh my gosh! this is such a cute lil fic! I absitively posilutely love it!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you!

Reviewer: AurorInTraining
Date: 09/04/07 17:45
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Aww. I love fluffy stuff. This was fluffiness to the max. What a great piece. You should see how big my grin is. Nice piece. James and Lily are a beautiful couple and you depicting them very well. Excelllent. Any other pieces you have?

Author's Response: Hehe, I hope it wasn't too fluffy; I like to have an even mix. Thank you for the review! I have a few other pieces, if you click on my screen name (KASK), it'll take you to my Author's Page where my stories are listed.

Reviewer: theawesomeness
Date: 09/04/07 0:28
Chapter: Getting The Girl

i was dissapointed with this, its definatly not your best work. but who am i to talk, i cant even spell 'definatly'.

Author's Response: Seriously? I mean, I'm sorry you were disappointed, but I like this story a lot and feel as though it's one of my better Lily/James. BTW, it's definitely.

Reviewer: orange_crusher
Date: 09/03/07 22:50
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Ha! I laughed so hard!

Author's Response: I'm glad! :D

Reviewer: Emma Radcliffe
Date: 09/03/07 3:49
Chapter: Getting The Girl

So cute! Nice twist, small but still rather effective! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/02/07 21:16
Chapter: Getting The Girl

Aww, that was brilliantly written! Great job i loved it! With the little redheaded boy and the blue eyed girl! Aww, it was so sweet and romantic! Please write some more! This was great! Love Your Storys

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

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