Very clever. I think you've just answered the question I set in the Badger Bar.
The tension you created in this story holds all the way through.
Trust the Malfoys to worm their way out of troulbe again. This was excellently written, especially Narcissa's answers, very quick thinking on her part. Well done.
Yes.
The defense had a very powerful and moving argument. As a parent, I can understand the defense's case. If I hadn't read books 1 - 6, then I could almost believe in the Malfoy's innocents - that they did what they did for the sake of their son.
And just when I thought that Narcissia would have gotten caught in a lie with her Legilimency, you turned things around with:
Do you think, given the strong emotional bond between a mother and her only son that I would have made the best teacher?”
That synched the verdict for me. It's no wonder he got away with it.
Your writing style is simple yet very descriptive. I love how people can word things to get their point across.
Like here:
Morris felt movement in his groin. God he wanted that woman.
You went deep there with his lust. It was bold (very bold), but I love that cause it got to the point of his feelings for her.
Great Job.
will there be any more chapters? *Pleasepleaseplease*
ha! thats funny. just wondreing... did morris ever do anything w/ narcissa???
It was really smart of you to write a fic on the Malfoys' trial. I think it's a really creative and original idea. You did an excellent job! I myself am also a very huge Law and Order fan! Great work!
heeheehee! FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
