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Name: Equinox Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/19/08 12:11 · For: A Stronger Woman
Very clever. I think you've just answered the question I set in the Badger Bar.

The tension you created in this story holds all the way through.


Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 02/09/08 15:31 · For: A Stronger Woman
Trust the Malfoys to worm their way out of troulbe again. This was excellently written, especially Narcissa's answers, very quick thinking on her part. Well done.


Name: mrsmcclnt (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 16:00 · For: A Stronger Woman
Yes.

The defense had a very powerful and moving argument. As a parent, I can understand the defense's case. If I hadn't read books 1 - 6, then I could almost believe in the Malfoy's innocents - that they did what they did for the sake of their son.

And just when I thought that Narcissia would have gotten caught in a lie with her Legilimency, you turned things around with:

Do you think, given the strong emotional bond between a mother and her only son that I would have made the best teacher?

That synched the verdict for me. It's no wonder he got away with it.

Your writing style is simple yet very descriptive. I love how people can word things to get their point across.
Like here:

Morris felt movement in his groin. God he wanted that woman.

You went deep there with his lust. It was bold (very bold), but I love that cause it got to the point of his feelings for her.

Great Job.


Name: Luna_and_Harry (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 15:49 · For: A Stronger Woman
will there be any more chapters? *Pleasepleaseplease*


Name: Luna_and_Harry (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 15:48 · For: A Stronger Woman
ha! thats funny. just wondreing... did morris ever do anything w/ narcissa???


Name: Prongs92 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 15:47 · For: A Stronger Woman
It was really smart of you to write a fic on the Malfoys' trial. I think it's a really creative and original idea. You did an excellent job! I myself am also a very huge Law and Order fan! Great work!


Name: Luna_and_Harry (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 15:37 · For: A Stronger Woman
heeheehee! FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


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