Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/19/08 12:11
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

Very clever. I think you've just answered the question I set in the Badger Bar.

The tension you created in this story holds all the way through.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/09/08 15:31
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

Trust the Malfoys to worm their way out of troulbe again. This was excellently written, especially Narcissa's answers, very quick thinking on her part. Well done.

Reviewer: mrsmcclnt
Date: 08/14/07 16:00
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

Yes.

The defense had a very powerful and moving argument. As a parent, I can understand the defense's case. If I hadn't read books 1 - 6, then I could almost believe in the Malfoy's innocents - that they did what they did for the sake of their son.

And just when I thought that Narcissia would have gotten caught in a lie with her Legilimency, you turned things around with:

Do you think, given the strong emotional bond between a mother and her only son that I would have made the best teacher?”

That synched the verdict for me. It's no wonder he got away with it.

Your writing style is simple yet very descriptive. I love how people can word things to get their point across.
Like here:

Morris felt movement in his groin. God he wanted that woman.

You went deep there with his lust. It was bold (very bold), but I love that cause it got to the point of his feelings for her.

Great Job.

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/14/07 15:49
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

will there be any more chapters? *Pleasepleaseplease*

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/14/07 15:48
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

ha! thats funny. just wondreing... did morris ever do anything w/ narcissa???

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 08/14/07 15:47
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

It was really smart of you to write a fic on the Malfoys' trial. I think it's a really creative and original idea. You did an excellent job! I myself am also a very huge Law and Order fan! Great work!

Reviewer: Luna_and_Harry
Date: 08/14/07 15:37
Chapter: A Stronger Woman

heeheehee! FIRST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
FEATURED
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.
CATEGORIES