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Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 16:53
Chapter: Chapter 3

awww...poor James and Lily!
please continue,
Lilia

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 2

good ol' Peter....although i hate him...
please continue!,
Lilia

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 2

good ol' Peter....although i hate him...
please continue!,
Lilia

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 08/04/08 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

awesome!
Lilia

Reviewer: xProngsForeverx
Date: 01/24/08 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 3

This fic is really good!
Please update soon!
And I agree with another reviewers' comment about being glad that Peter having some good qualities that are actually recognized. Not many authors do that. Even though I hate him for what he does to James, Lily, and ultimately Harry, it was a nice change.
Keep up the good work! (and the sexy James Potter)!

Author's Response: Yes, the sexy James Potter> I'm so in love with him, it's not funny. My life's been really hectic at the moment which is why i javen't posted in a while, but I'm back to normal and promise the next chapter within the next week!

Reviewer: in love with harry
Date: 11/08/07 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 3

good story cant wait to read more keep it connim

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 11/06/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 3

more! more! more!
But I do think it's possible for Lily to notice that James is extremely good-looking and still think he's annoying...she would, I think, be confident enough in her own ability not to like people just based on their looks to acknowledge that James is handsome.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 11/06/07 9:02
Chapter: Chapter 3

lol! loved it!

Reviewer: duskshadow
Date: 11/06/07 0:33
Chapter: Chapter 3

haha this is great, poor lily's in real trouble now eh?
Little bit slow to start with but it's coming along nicely - i really like all the detail at the start with James' parents, it was a really nice touch. Hope to see more soon!

Reviewer: furry_gardener_fan
Date: 11/05/07 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 3

BORING SORRY BUT GEEZZEEE..............IT SO SLOW AND BORING IV HERD IT ALL BEFORE

I HATE U POTTER BUT I LOVE U SECRETLY

THINK OF SOMETHIN NEW AND SPEED IT UUUPPP

Reviewer: ThisMustBeLove
Date: 11/05/07 3:42
Chapter: Chapter 3

Just wondering are you into the whole wicca, neopagan thingy?? cause u mentioned beltnae in chapter 2 and if u r u should really read the Wicca series by Cate Tiernan

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 18:28
Chapter: Chapter 2

This is a really good story so far! Definitly going in my favs :) you've got excellent characterization and the story is developing really nicely. Your writing is absolutly brilliant! UPDATE!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! It's nice to be called a good writer. I'm working on chapter 3 and should have it to you soon!

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 3:40
Chapter: Chapter 2

This is a really good story so far! Definitly going in my favs :) you've got excellent characterization and the story is developing really nicely. Your writing is absolutly brilliant! UPDATE!!!!

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

gppd chapter! it kind of reminds me of the hole american dream thing...lol. the writing is great and i like your view of lily's reaction :) good start!

Author's Response: Lol, I tried to think of how I would react if i were her and that's what came out. Lily's a great girl just a bit mislead in the beginning. She'll come round though :)

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 10/18/07 15:23
Chapter: Chapter 2

Hmmm...this doesn't seem to be going the way most James/Lily stories go. It's a nice break from the norm, and it also helps that you're a rather good writer. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Is being different a good thing or a bad thing? I just don't want the story to be the same old, same old...but the heart of the story is essentially the same

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 10/17/07 20:55
Chapter: Chapter 2

Aww, as much as I hate what Peter did to James and Lily years after this, I know he didn't become a Marauder for nothing. I like your ending! It's not always I see Peter being dragged in the same league as the other three. Hope you update soon! ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. That little piece of advice came from my absolutley brilliant beta, Kate. She has to keep reminding me that he was their friend and they must have liked him. Personally I can't stand Peter. Chapter three is in the works so stay tuned :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. That little piece of advice came from my absolutley brilliant beta, Kate. She has to keep reminding me that he was their friend and they must have liked him. Personally I can't stand Peter. Chapter three is in the works so stay tuned :)

Reviewer: popcorn11689
Date: 09/05/07 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story seems pretty accurate to the actual story....i think that a lot of people forget that james and lily were both head boy and girl and of course lily would be shocked! :) anyways, you should (everyone should really) visit the hp lexicon site if you haven't already because there is information on lily and james that isn't really mentioned in the books ;)

Author's Response: Thanks popcorn for the review! I practically live on HP lexicon, it's an awesome sight. I am trying to keep this a true to the timeline as possible, stay tuned for more :)

Reviewer: beatifically
Date: 09/03/07 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Poor James! :(
Post chapter two soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, my heart goes out to James, I wish he'd give up on Lily and go for me instead, but alas then I'd have nothing to write about ;)

Reviewer: Eviegrl941
Date: 09/02/07 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW!!! Please write more soon!!!

Author's Response: I'll do my best!!!

Reviewer: Lily Cambers
Date: 09/01/07 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was good

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