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Name: lily16 (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 21:39 · For: Chapter 2
this chapter's even better than the last one. i love how you characterized ginny and neville. i especialy like how you made luna more serious, yet kept her weirdness. i think the ministry breakin in should have happened a little later though.
can't wait to read more ;-)


Author's Response: No, the Ministry break-in really happened on September the second. Harry comes back to Grimmauld Place on the first and notes that surveillance is even greater than usual, and then he goes in and has the conversation with Ron and Hermione where he says, "I think we should do it tomorrow." And they do.


Name: cookie35 (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 19:56 · For: Chapter 1
I'm so happy your writing again. You are my favorite fanfiction author! This chapter was really good. Can't wait for the next one. By the way, what happened to your website (bitchnmoan)? I can't find it anymore.

Author's Response: We just decided not to renew it.


Name: barnaby (Signed) · Date: 08/23/07 3:21 · For: Chapter 1
awesome! cant wait for the rest.


Name: Divster (Signed) · Date: 08/19/07 8:37 · For: Chapter 1
this is awesome!! it sounds like JKR's style of writing 2...write more!!


Name: Bethlw2129 (Signed) · Date: 08/18/07 23:34 · For: Chapter 1
This is great! Please write more!


Name: brittany18baby (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 0:39 · For: Chapter 1
Sorry about that, I mixed your sequel with another of my favorite sequels that weren't finished.


Name: brittany18baby (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 0:34 · For: Chapter 1
I really like it so far!! I hope the DA rock the school and give them hell, but the answer to that is obvious if you read DH right? Anyway I can't wait for the next update! By the way are you ever going to finish the sequel to Ginny's gift?


Name: red haired mom (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 22:43 · For: Chapter 1
This is great. I know some of the authors here have written missing moment fics from DH, but you are writing a completely different perspective on it. I am amazed every time I read one of your fics at how seamlessly you write with JK.
I liked the descriptions showing Ginnyís mood. And I was happy to see the three of them standing up for themselves in the face of Ministry henchmen and Malfoy. Neville definitely has grown from the first book, and I adore him. When he came through the tunnel in DH, I was ecstatic.
Thank you for writing this. I am really enjoying it and canít wait until you update. I hope you will take this POV through the entire book, not just part of it. Anyway, great job, keep it coming.


Name: Lady Snuffles (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 21:29 · For: Chapter 1
I am SO glad that you came back to writing! Some of my favorite work comes from you and I can't wait to see the story progress!


Name: bigk7brave (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 18:24 · For: Chapter 1
luv the story can't wait for more from u!!


Name: snapefan2007 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 16:47 · For: Chapter 1
i like it!


Name: Rosco (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 7:21 · For: Chapter 1
I like the things so far. It is a good idea to show the view of the people still at hogwarts!!!

My only comment is that I think Luna is already more developed as character then you wrote so far. But keep up the good work!!!


Name: SecretKeeper42 (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 0:17 · For: Chapter 1
I've been looking forward to a good fic following Neville, Ginny and Luna during Year 7. Looks like it's off to a good start.


Name: Iamhouseelf (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 23:03 · For: Chapter 1
I love it I absolutly love it! thank you soo much for writing this I really need some closer. You are such a good writer too. The way you portray the points of view, and discriptions of how they feel. It's really easy to get into your writing. Keep it up! -Dobby rules!


Name: koolkitty (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 19:25 · For: Chapter 1
Fantastic start. I think you really hit the nail on the head in terms of the mood of the story and charecters. Can't wait to read the student perspective!


Name: self named harry potter freak (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 19:12 · For: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!!! As much as i kno that Snape is good in the end, from Ginny's POV i can't help but absolutely hate him. he's such an arse,a nd you do a great job with conveying Ginny's absolute disgust that he was given the position of headmaster. absolutely perfect. i cant wait for the "constany, low-level mutiny from the hardcore students" that Phineaus mentioned in book 7. keep it up!!

~Snhpf


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