Reviews For Into the Chamber
Reviewer: nerzhulghosh
Date: 09/02/07 2:38
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Good, quite detailed, and very interesting, but you made Ron look very stupid, i wish you hadn't don that.
Unfortunately, you are not the first one to have written on this matter..................

Author's Response: Where abouts does Ron look stupid?

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/01/07 15:56
Chapter: Into the Chamber

LOL I realy enjoyed this. I don't know if Hermione would have been quit that distracted, but it was still great!! The almost kiss was the best part. Cyns

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 09/01/07 15:24
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Jo herself couldn't have put this moment any better!
Good job!

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 09/01/07 13:50
Chapter: Into the Chamber

that was sweet... i kind of like it... cheers to you!

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 09/01/07 8:45
Chapter: Into the Chamber

he he very good
but im getting frustrated that there has not been a single dh spoiler fic which has their KISS in! huh!

Reviewer: rsyeda
Date: 08/31/07 21:05
Chapter: Into the Chamber

love ittttt
i reallly like this and it fit in with the book really welll!

Reviewer: lifewrite
Date: 08/31/07 20:59
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Great job. I thought about writing this scene too. You did better than I probably would have. It very much sounds like rowling herself would have written it. 10

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 08/31/07 18:49
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Brilliant! I love it! ~MJ

Reviewer: danielsgirl
Date: 08/31/07 18:22
Chapter: Into the Chamber

OOOhh.... Who is it? I'm waiting on the next chapter!

Author's Response: It was Harry. This one-chapter story takes place the moment Harry leaves with Luna to the Ravenclaw common room and picks up when Harry runs into Ron and Hermione.

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 08/31/07 17:33
Chapter: Into the Chamber

very clever.. i like the way you write it is almost the same as JKRs i belive that you have some serious writing talent

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 08/31/07 17:33
Chapter: Into the Chamber

very clever.. i like the way you write it is almost the same as JKRs i belive that you have some serious writing talent

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 08/31/07 17:33
Chapter: Into the Chamber

very clever.. i like the way you write it is almost the same as JKRs i belive that you have some serious writing talent

Reviewer: Bonnie11
Date: 08/31/07 16:49
Chapter: Into the Chamber

That was so good, i love these sort of fics, the ones that fill in blank spots,and it was brillantly written, well done.

Reviewer: leesmiley
Date: 08/31/07 16:28
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Well done! I'm a big fan of truth in fiction and this piece is just that. A perfectly plausible, and well-written, answer to a question many of us had.

Reviewer: AurorInTraining
Date: 08/31/07 16:09
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Excellent Job! I think you should have written a bit more in that story, and I was a little bored at some parts, but still very good!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 08/31/07 15:08
Chapter: Into the Chamber

I swear I've read this on another site...hmm, well, good job anyways. You are the ruler of all Ron/Hermione stuff after "Daddy"

Reviewer: x_GinnyPotter_x
Date: 08/31/07 14:54
Chapter: Into the Chamber

Ahhh! I love it! Very good Ron/Hermione missing moment =]

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 08/31/07 14:37
Chapter: Into the Chamber

I will NOT have my first kiss with Ron at the bottom of a toilet sink!

A perfect line! Honestly, this was such a perfect story. Ron and Hermione were perfectly in character, and the emotions were portrayed very realistically. It's such an important moment in their relationship', so I'm glad someone wrote about it in a fic ^_^

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