Good, quite detailed, and very interesting, but you made Ron look very stupid, i wish you hadn't don that.
Unfortunately, you are not the first one to have written on this matter..................
Author's Response: Where abouts does Ron look stupid?
LOL I realy enjoyed this. I don't know if Hermione would have been quit that distracted, but it was still great!! The almost kiss was the best part. Cyns
Jo herself couldn't have put this moment any better!
Good job!
that was sweet... i kind of like it... cheers to you!
he he very good
but im getting frustrated that there has not been a single dh spoiler fic which has their KISS in! huh!
love ittttt
i reallly like this and it fit in with the book really welll!
Great job. I thought about writing this scene too. You did better than I probably would have. It very much sounds like rowling herself would have written it. 10
OOOhh.... Who is it? I'm waiting on the next chapter!
Author's Response: It was Harry. This one-chapter story takes place the moment Harry leaves with Luna to the Ravenclaw common room and picks up when Harry runs into Ron and Hermione.
very clever.. i like the way you write it is almost the same as JKRs i belive that you have some serious writing talent
very clever.. i like the way you write it is almost the same as JKRs i belive that you have some serious writing talent
very clever.. i like the way you write it is almost the same as JKRs i belive that you have some serious writing talent
That was so good, i love these sort of fics, the ones that fill in blank spots,and it was brillantly written, well done.
Well done! I'm a big fan of truth in fiction and this piece is just that. A perfectly plausible, and well-written, answer to a question many of us had.
Excellent Job! I think you should have written a bit more in that story, and I was a little bored at some parts, but still very good!
I swear I've read this on another site...hmm, well, good job anyways. You are the ruler of all Ron/Hermione stuff after "Daddy"
Ahhh! I love it! Very good Ron/Hermione missing moment =]
I will NOT have my first kiss with Ron at the bottom of a toilet sink!
A perfect line! Honestly, this was such a perfect story. Ron and Hermione were perfectly in character, and the emotions were portrayed very realistically. It's such an important moment in their relationship', so I'm glad someone wrote about it in a fic ^_^