loved it. I was extremely impressed at how you took something that wasn't yours at all and turned it into something that I could have belived original. Excellently done, my friend. Marvelous.
Very ditaled I really would give it three and a half stars. Great job
I think I found a tiny error* is sorry *
The conversation between the elf and his aunt fell deaf upon his ears.
Shouldn't it be goblin instead of elf?=Sammy
It was a nice story. I really liked the way you mixed your own style with Deathly Hallows. Great job,=Sammy
this is good.
Awesome, I can totally imagine this happening! Good job x)
I loved how you told this from Draco's point of view! It was good.
That was. . . extreme. I loved it! I really should stop saying that about every story I read, but there have been some memorable times when I didn't, and in this case, it's true. The way Draco thinks about how Hermione's eyes are sad and desperate, in contrast to the way they're normally fiery and bright, is just so heartbreaking. I really never thought of it is so much detail, and you really helped. That is exactly how I think Draco could have been feeling at that point: helpless, sad, depressed, scared, even angry. is there going to be any more? Or does it end here? I think it would be great either way. I thank you for yet another great read here on MNFF.
Great one-shot! I really like how you combined it with the Deathly Hallows. Great Job!
Breath-taking, heart-wrenching, amazing, beautiful excellence. That is what this fic is: Excellence. This was a rather dark, yet beautiful fic. Everything fit in perfectly with DH, and was written with the quill (keyboard) of a truly talented person. This is the reason you are one of my favorite authors, your work is always outstanding and emotion/thought provoking. You should be very proud of yourself. Excellence, pure excellence.
*sniff* that chapter in DH is so saddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway, good story!! :-)