Reviewer: random fan
Date: 08/09/07 1:40
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

Thats a good angle on that story, why James changed in lily's eyes. I liked it.

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 08/09/07 1:29
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

Oh, my gosh, this story's so original! I loved how James got advice from a total stranger, and it was a stroke of genius that he told that same story to Harry! It's so sweet, really loved it. And what's with that author's note at the end? This one-shot was amazing, you're being too harsh on yourself! (:

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 08/09/07 0:53
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

Don't be harsh? If I were harsh I'd be a prize prat because you wrote a great little story! The only criticism I'd have is with the sentence "…And that’s the last time I’ve ever saw the bloke again." I think you meant to say either "…And that’s the last time I ever saw the bloke." or "…And I never saw the bloke again." Your sentence seems to be midway between them and therefore well garbled.

Author's Response: I caught the mistake, and I showed it to my dad, but he said that I didn't need to change it, because that was the way people talked, in the present tense when they are telling a story. However, I need to delete that "I've" and replace it with "I". Thanks for catching the mistake!

Reviewer: Emma Radcliffe
Date: 08/08/07 23:52
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

Cool! (sorry for the short review)

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 08/08/07 23:15
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

LOVED LOVED that story! DH spoilers next. It was an option though Snape and Lily and it kind of creeps me out so I think it was good that James won her in the end.

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 08/08/07 23:15
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

LOVED LOVED that story! DH spoilers next. It was an option though Snape and Lily and it kind of creeps me out so I think it was good that James won her in the end.

Reviewer: ballerinaprincess
Date: 08/08/07 23:15
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

LOVED LOVED that story! DH spoilers next. It was an option though Snape and Lily and it kind of creeps me out so I think it was good that James won her in the end.

Reviewer: Success
Date: 08/08/07 23:08
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

It was really sweet! But y was Harry Potter in a cab?

Author's Response: You must've missed that he said to Jake that he wanted to go to Ottery St. Catchpole, which is a village near to the Burrow...

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/08/07 22:27
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

From the beginning I was hooked. Your writing is beautiful. The ending made me laugh. This story was really sweet. Great job!

Author's Response: I've extremely glad that you've liked. You've made my day!

Reviewer: Chaser11725
Date: 08/08/07 22:13
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

it was really good i especially liked the ending how harry was added into it

Reviewer: beauty and brains
Date: 08/08/07 22:12
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

This was absolutely brilliant! No matter if James wouldn't travel by cab, you created a very powerful story. The cabbie was a great story-teller, very realistic. The end was great, and the last line couldn't be written any better! Congrats, I give a 10/10! Wonderful job, keep writing!

Reviewer: Chaser11725
Date: 08/08/07 22:12
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

that was good i really liked the ending with harry in it

Reviewer: VerySocialHermit
Date: 08/08/07 21:35
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

This was a brilliant idea. Truly original, I haven't seen any Lily/James stories like this at all. I really love how a stranger gave James all this advice, especially love that the stranger was a Muggle. And I simply adore how Harry met Jake too, years later. It was a truly beautiful story, despite being a bit depressing in the beginning. Love it, write more!

Author's Response: This is probably one of the best reviews I've ever received. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/08/07 20:34
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

AWWWW... That's so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 08/08/07 19:40
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

thats so sweet!!!
i love it!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed it!

Reviewer: junior_achievement
Date: 08/08/07 19:23
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

aww, that was so cute! i loved how harry was jake's passenger 20 years later. you really got the message of the story across well.
great job!
=]

Author's Response: It was a brilliant inspiration, that ending. I think I got the whole idea from the Simpsons (there was an episode about where Homer, drunk, got into a taxicab and spilled his secrets). But the ending was really a brilliant stroke of inspiration, if I do say so myself. Thanks a lot for the review!

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/08/07 18:59
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwww i'm all happy now. *sniff*

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/08/07 18:59
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwww i'm all happy now. *sniff*

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/08/07 18:58
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwww i'm all happy now. *sniff*

Author's Response: I'm very glad. Thanks!

Reviewer: Lozzie28
Date: 08/08/07 18:08
Chapter: Taxicab Conversations

i really liked ..verywell written 2 thumbs up

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

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