omg so great keep writing!!!
aww!!.. one of the best James-Lily fic I've read so far.. :)
AWWWW omg i loved it! When I read the ending, I literally clapped out loud, ask my sister in the same room as me! Brilliant one-shot! PLEASE write more Lily/James fics!
wow. this is really good!! i love it!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I love the cute little ending!
I loved this. The ending especially. *adds to favorites*
i think it had a cute ending =) good job.
I loved this story! Awesome!
Oh my god. Loved it!
i really really like it! It's soo sweet!
OMG!! that was soo cuteee!!! i loved it!!!
great job.. it was awesome! the ending was my favorite part...
It was cute. I really liked that!
that was pretty good i must say!
good job! =)
Once I finished reading that, I couldn't stop giggling.
I loved it! Such an original idea, and I love how you tied it all in with Harry in the end. :]
But in this line "He had gone out in hopes that a bite a fresh air.." Do you mean bit instead of bite?
*giggles* that was good, I liked it! One mistake though, how could Jake pat James on the back if James was sitting in the back of the cab? Besides that it was well written! Good job! I hope you write some more! I liked the Harry twist at the end! :)
Author's Response: Do you think it possible that he could simply reach over and tap James lightly on the shoulder before quickly turning back to the road? Or at least that's the way I think of it. Thanks for the review!
I really liked this story. I have only one critque: Taxi-cabs in England are black--every single one--and not yellow.
Author's Response: Okay, now I'm embarrassed...I think it's a bit too late to change it, so if anyone catches the mistake, just ignore it. Thank you for being the first to catch it!
Very clever little fic! I was pleasantly surprised by the ending. This is very nice, keep up the good work :-)
It's very original and well written :D That pretty much gets a big tick in my book. And I love how Harry met Jake 20 years later, even if it was for a brief moment.