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Name: i love prongs (Signed) · Date: 11/15/07 15:32 · For: Duel
loved it!

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 11/07/07 19:48 · For: Duel
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 8:13 · For: Duel
Oh nice first reviewer!! Good chapter i hope Lily's alright I hope she sees through Snape and goes right to James!! Oh I'm naming my instrument Gilbert (I play a Bari sax) Good one can't wait for more you have me at the edge of my seat!!

Author's Response: I've never given my piano a name. I should : ) and James......wait and see....

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 10/21/07 11:15 · For: Wandlight
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Why thank you.

Name: KaileeA42 (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 18:03 · For: Wandlight
I really like this story. After book 7 I really felt bad for Snape and really sorry for him. My mom still ahtes him though. I like how you characterized both of them and the underwater thing was really creative too. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really wanted to know more after reading that little bit of Snape and Lily's history, so I wrote some.

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 9:21 · For: The Playground
Aw thats soo cute.. its like there a brother and isster well in lilys thoughts.. i guess it would be weird if they went out seeing how close they are... so i guess it was never really ever ment to be between them cause they were such good friends i guess.. sorry if i confused you!! good chapter!!

Author's Response: I was a bit confused : ) But keep reading because things are going to happen...

Name: RonandMioneForever (Signed) · Date: 10/20/07 0:11 · For: Wandlight
This is amazing so far. I love the Severus/Lily dynamic of the books. Can't wait for an update! It's going to favorites

Oh and I thought this was oh so ironic:
"...One day, Lily, Iíll get you and then youíll regret every time youíve cursed me.Ē

Author's Response: Ohhh.... I wasn't sure whether I wanted to include that sentence, it seems to blunt. But, I can't help a little foreshadowing.

Name: sureves (Signed) · Date: 09/25/07 4:08 · For: Sneaky Sneak Attacks
Brillinat Writing. Wonderful Characterizations. I just love Severus! Please update soon.

Name: Nymphea (Signed) · Date: 09/22/07 22:00 · For: Sneaky Sneak Attacks
You're doing such a good job with the characterization! This could have come right out of "The Prince's Tale". It's so well thought-out and true to how I imagine the characters!

Name: sureves (Signed) · Date: 09/21/07 17:17 · For: The Playground
hey, u've got a brilluant writing style and I just loved your portrayal of severus snape! keep going. post the next chapter soon, please.

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 09/13/07 17:24 · For: Sneaky Sneak Attacks
Cool story! I liked the way you had Summer Sev and school Severus.
Nothing good can come from putting James and Snape together.

Update soon!

Name: Indhira (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 21:05 · For: The Barrier and Train
This is a really good story :)! I had been looking forward to read something about Lily and Sev and your story seems to be going pretty well! Keep it up please and update soon :D!

Name: njyecats (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 17:51 · For: The Barrier and Train
Very good so far. I can't wait to read more

Name: njyecats (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 17:50 · For: The Barrier and Train
Very good so far. I can't wait to read more

Name: harryandginnyrock (Signed) · Date: 08/20/07 11:35 · For: The Playground
Good so far.

Author's Response: thank you.

Name: Lyra the Lovely (Signed) · Date: 08/20/07 9:56 · For: The Playground
Great writing. Keep going. I'm writing a similar fic and enjoy reading yours. KEEP WRITING!

Author's Response: Yay! I want to read it. I'm writing this one because I couldn't find a story on Sev and Lily I really liked.

Name: Amarie (Signed) · Date: 08/17/07 14:05 · For: The Playground
I like it so far. I think you've set the stage for some really interesting personal / relationship exploration, and I'd like to see how you develop the characters. Keep it up. :)

Author's Response: There is definitely more development to come. Just setting the stage I guess.

Name: cutiepoet (Signed) · Date: 08/16/07 22:04 · For: The Playground
Cute. I liked it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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