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Name: Winnyy (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 7:52 · For: The Playground
Oooh, this is great!=]

Really, I love it!=]

I can't remember if I've reviewed before. =/
I don't think I have, but *if* I have , sorry. =[

Name: Lyra the Lovely (Signed) · Date: 04/28/08 16:57 · For: Chopped Beetles
Excellent. A perfect twist. it hit me just like Severus hit James, didn't see it coming. Are you studying to be a writer? Because if you are i really want to read the books you come up with, they'll be great. Next Chapter please, i can only read these so many times.

Name: Winnyy (Signed) · Date: 04/27/08 13:33 · For: The Barrier and Train
Oh Severus.
It's not too late. Please, let go of that anger.... It isn't the answer.


Name: Winnyy (Signed) · Date: 04/27/08 13:30 · For: The Playground
Severus DOES so very much remind me of ...


Lily/Severus goes. Definitely. :)

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 04/26/08 13:18 · For: Chopped Beetles
Oh one thing to point out before i start my raving about this chapter.. It says James was a chaser not a seeker. Oh snap! Amazing chapter Im litterally at the edge of my chair! Nicely done witht he suspension and stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 04/26/08 13:11 · For: Green, brown, black.
OH Lily and james and snape patroling alone, and togeher!! OH THE EXCITEMENT!!! Ah onward to teh next chapter!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 22:45 · For: Chopped Beetles
Ooooo!! Tricky move Sev!! Obliviating James, so he'll have no memory of what he saw in the dungeons. Sweet!
I wonder if Snape was going to try the potion on James. Sounds like a Snape-like idea to me...
Great story and I look forward to the next chapter!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 22:01 · For: Green, brown, black.
OH well, at least they won't be dueling after curfew any more.
Another great chapter...James can't seem to shake off his arrogence. I would call him a smart ass, wiseguy, etc, etc, sorry for the 'smartass' comment....

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 21:50 · For: Duel
Oh boy! a true fight between two wizards, and it sounds like each of them got his. I'm surprized James did'nt go for the most obvious, Snape's nose. I suppose he was so mad, that he wanted to hit every part of Snape he could reach.
Poor Lily, right in the middle of it! Hopefully, Severus won't take it out on her, for being there...
Great chapter!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 21:37 · For: Wandlight
Wow! a short chapter!! I just started reading and poof! The end! lol ;0) JUst teasing!
Well, they almost kissed...A very brief chapter, but fun!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 21:31 · For: Sneaky Sneak Attacks
Wow, James and Severus as partners in DADA...Of cousre, James would be relentless, what else would he be against Severus Snape?
Great story, and now that classes have begun, it should be interesting to see how Sev and Lily survive the school year.

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 21:21 · For: The Barrier and Train
Severus, the relunctant friend. He's so worried about offending the Slytherin set, that he becomes blinded by their power of persuasion, and loses his chances at being a bit affectionate towards Lily.
What ever he's afraid of, he's got to get over it, if he wants to be more than afriend to Lily Evans.
Great story, I love it!

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 21:07 · For: The Playground
Cute story. I've often wondered if Lily and Severus were ever close after the 'mudblood' comment he made after James upended him that time.
I really think in all honesty, that these two, minus James Potter of course, would have had a nice relationship. Then again, you have Sev's involvement with those Death Eater pals of his...

Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 04/25/08 17:33 · For: Chopped Beetles
That was an amazing chapter, please update soon.

Name: Lyra the Lovely (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 18:20 · For: Green, brown, black.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I've been waiting for this story for ages. Keep it up!

Name: Nivnami (Signed) · Date: 04/02/08 10:03 · For: Green, brown, black.





Author's Response: Oh, you're so nice! That's really what makes me want to write, all the good comments.

Name: Lyra the Lovely (Signed) · Date: 12/31/07 13:53 · For: Duel
When is the next chapter coming out? I need to read more! It's adicting. Write more soon!

Author's Response: AHHH! sorrysorrysorry. Life got in the way. I have the next chapter almost finished.

Name: Lyra the Lovely (Signed) · Date: 11/30/07 21:14 · For: Duel
great job. I WAS BEGINING TO WONDER WHETHER YOU DISCONTINUED THIS STORY. i cant wait for the next chapter. write fast.
ps. sry about the caps locks

Name: njyecats (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 14:27 · For: The Playground
I love the story! I just wanted to let you know though that in Ch 1 & 2, you sometimes spell Lily's name Lilly. You may want to reread those 2 chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's been a big problem with me. I had a wonderful pet rat named Lilly and I can't break the habit. Lily, Lilly, Lily, Lilly.

Name: i love prongs (Signed) · Date: 11/15/07 15:32 · For: The Playground
loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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