Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/03/08 7:52
Chapter: The Playground

Oooh, this is great!=]

Really, I love it!=]

I can't remember if I've reviewed before. =/
I don't think I have, but *if* I have , sorry. =[

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 04/28/08 16:57
Chapter: Chopped Beetles

Excellent. A perfect twist. it hit me just like Severus hit James, didn't see it coming. Are you studying to be a writer? Because if you are i really want to read the books you come up with, they'll be great. Next Chapter please, i can only read these so many times.

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 04/27/08 13:33
Chapter: The Barrier and Train

Oh Severus.
It's not too late. Please, let go of that anger.... It isn't the answer.

=[

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 04/27/08 13:30
Chapter: The Playground

Awwww.
Severus DOES so very much remind me of ...

Harry.

Lily/Severus goes. Definitely. :)

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 04/26/08 13:18
Chapter: Chopped Beetles

Oh one thing to point out before i start my raving about this chapter.. It says James was a chaser not a seeker. Oh snap! Amazing chapter Im litterally at the edge of my chair! Nicely done witht he suspension and stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 04/26/08 13:11
Chapter: Green, brown, black.

OH Lily and james and snape patroling alone, and togeher!! OH THE EXCITEMENT!!! Ah onward to teh next chapter!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 22:45
Chapter: Chopped Beetles

Ooooo!! Tricky move Sev!! Obliviating James, so he'll have no memory of what he saw in the dungeons. Sweet!
I wonder if Snape was going to try the potion on James. Sounds like a Snape-like idea to me...
Great story and I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 22:01
Chapter: Green, brown, black.

OH well, at least they won't be dueling after curfew any more.
Another great chapter...James can't seem to shake off his arrogence. I would call him a smart ass, wiseguy, etc, etc, sorry for the 'smartass' comment....

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 21:50
Chapter: Duel

Oh boy! a true fight between two wizards, and it sounds like each of them got his. I'm surprized James did'nt go for the most obvious, Snape's nose. I suppose he was so mad, that he wanted to hit every part of Snape he could reach.
Poor Lily, right in the middle of it! Hopefully, Severus won't take it out on her, for being there...
Great chapter!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 21:37
Chapter: Wandlight

Wow! a short chapter!! I just started reading and poof! The end! lol ;0) JUst teasing!
Well, they almost kissed...A very brief chapter, but fun!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 21:31
Chapter: Sneaky Sneak Attacks

Wow, James and Severus as partners in DADA...Of cousre, James would be relentless, what else would he be against Severus Snape?
Great story, and now that classes have begun, it should be interesting to see how Sev and Lily survive the school year.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 21:21
Chapter: The Barrier and Train

Severus, the relunctant friend. He's so worried about offending the Slytherin set, that he becomes blinded by their power of persuasion, and loses his chances at being a bit affectionate towards Lily.
What ever he's afraid of, he's got to get over it, if he wants to be more than afriend to Lily Evans.
Great story, I love it!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 04/25/08 21:07
Chapter: The Playground

Cute story. I've often wondered if Lily and Severus were ever close after the 'mudblood' comment he made after James upended him that time.
I really think in all honesty, that these two, minus James Potter of course, would have had a nice relationship. Then again, you have Sev's involvement with those Death Eater pals of his...

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 04/25/08 17:33
Chapter: Chopped Beetles

That was an amazing chapter, please update soon.

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 04/03/08 18:20
Chapter: Green, brown, black.

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I've been waiting for this story for ages. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Nivnami
Date: 04/02/08 10:03
Chapter: Green, brown, black.

I SOOOOO LOVE THIS STORY.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU'VE PORTRAYED THE CHARACTERS SOOO PERFECTLY.

THIS STORY IS ONE OF THE BEST POST-DH FICS I'VE READ. PLEASE UPDATE SOON

ALL THE BEST

P.S. I'VE ADDED THIS STORY TO MY FAVORITES!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, you're so nice! That's really what makes me want to write, all the good comments.

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 12/31/07 13:53
Chapter: Duel

When is the next chapter coming out? I need to read more! It's adicting. Write more soon!

Author's Response: AHHH! sorrysorrysorry. Life got in the way. I have the next chapter almost finished.

Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 11/30/07 21:14
Chapter: Duel

great job. I WAS BEGINING TO WONDER WHETHER YOU DISCONTINUED THIS STORY. i cant wait for the next chapter. write fast.
ps. sry about the caps locks

Reviewer: njyecats
Date: 11/20/07 14:27
Chapter: The Playground

I love the story! I just wanted to let you know though that in Ch 1 & 2, you sometimes spell Lily's name Lilly. You may want to reread those 2 chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's been a big problem with me. I had a wonderful pet rat named Lilly and I can't break the habit. Lily, Lilly, Lily, Lilly.

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 11/15/07 15:32
Chapter: The Playground

loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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