I'm kind of writing a story about what these guys did that year aswell... if thats okay with u.
Author's Response: Sure, it's cool! I reckon I'll check it out n_n
Hi Enchantedsleeper
Wow, that chapter was certainly worth the wait. I loved how you really captured the grim environment the school has now become with Snape and the Carrows in charge. As to how you portrayed Snape's character, I think you did very well.
I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Apparating Girl.
PS: thanks for that lovely comment about liking my name. I really like yours too.
Author's Response: Heeeey, good to see you again! Thanks a lot, I use this name everywhere, I really like it ^^ I'm glad I did okay with portraying the atmosphere and Snape's character. Chapter 3 is in the works!
ohhhh this one is going into my fav's. I love the beginning! Can't wait to read future chapters! LONG LIVE THE D.A.!!!
Author's Response: GO DUMBLEDORE'S ARMY! :D I'm so honoured you like this enough to fave it n__n
I like it so far. The characterizations are pretty good. I especially liked the sorting hat song. It fit in well with the horcrux hunt and it flowed well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! n_n No one on fanfiction.net commented on the Sorting Hat song, so it's so great that people from Mugglenet did :D It was pretty hard to write a song that fitted in with the horcruxes and Ginny + co. stealing the Sword of Gryffindor, but if you guys like it then I did ok!
This was really quite excellent. I've been waiting for GOOD story about what happened at Hogwarts while the main Trio were out hunting Horcruxes. Great Job, I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hey, sorry it's taken me so long to respond. Thank you very much for your review; chapter three is just about to go up!
that was amazing =)
i think you write them really well!
interesting choice of story aswell, i've been dying to read something about life back at hogwarts
5 thumbs up =D
Author's Response: Hey, sorry it's taken me so long to respond! Thank you very much for all the awesome compliments =D Chapter 3 is now up!
characterisation was amazingly acurate. you portrayed everyone just as i imagined them to be. it is really sad about the muggle borns. i can't wait for the next chapter, hope you get it up before september!!
Author's Response: Sadly, I didn't >w< and I'm sorry it's taken me so long both to post chapter 3 and to respond to your review. I hope you enjoy it, though! Thanks very much for reviewing :)
really good portrayal of the characters
what does sixth/ fifth former mean?
Author's Response: Sixth former is someone in their second-to-last year at Hogwarts. Fifth former someone in is the year before that (so OWL year).
Hi enchantedsleeper
I absolutely loved what you've written so far. I'm very intreagued and am dying to know what happens next.
I saw you wanted feeback in regards to how well you kept the Characters in character. My answer is that you have done very well with them so far.
Keep up your writing.
Apparating Girl
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the feedback and encouragement :D I won't keep you in suspense - I've finished chapter 2 and am about to submit it. By the way, I like your name ^^
keep writting! this is really good, can't wait to read the next chapters
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Chapter 2 is almost done.
This is really good, deffinitely keep writing. I love the idea, I'm so glad someone's doing it. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :D Chapter 2 will be out very soon.
Nice! It's so good to see some of what Ginny, Neville, and Luna were up to, since we didn't see hardly any of it in the book like i wanted to.
Author's Response: Yeah, JK Rowling gave a few hints, but there are tons of gaps to fill in ^^ It was just begging to be written about.
woot! i love this even if you stole my idea. haha just kidding. i wrote the first chapter to my version of hogwarts, but it was horrible so i never sbmitted it. okay well this is really good! keep wriing
Author's Response: Aww, you should have submitted it! I would have liked to read it.
