That wuz really good 4 ur first fic, but i suggest commiting to it a little more next time, its totally worth it when you can read it and say, "wow, i wrote this!!??"

*dreamy sigh* I love SS/HG.

Most of the SS/HG fics i've read end up in this love/hate relationship in a countryside estate after the war. And, quite frankly, i'm quite sick of them. This story was a good change of scenery, so to speak.

There were a few spots where severus seemed to be speaking as a man far younger than himself- with less trials, and at the time i thought it was OOC, but i'm beginning to think that maybe you did that on purpose? Maybe it's just the fact that loving someone so many years younger than you brings that out in you. 'Young again' of some sort.

Overall, though, i really enjoyed this fic. It seemed to hold just the right amount of something that held my attention. Great job!

-Emma

Author's Response: oh wow, thank you, that is the best review i've ever recieved:D some of it is purposely done, but there might be more than i've done unconsciously, i tend to write first and then think.

I really liked it. It was very well-written.

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much:D

SICKO!!!

Author's Response: ehm, thanks??