Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/23/08 15:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hermione Remembers

Sad.....Keep writing, person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lilypotter55
Date: 03/23/08 15:01
Chapter: Prologue

Love it.

Reviewer: mrs_ginnerva_potter
Date: 01/08/08 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hermione Remembers

why did u kill ginny like tht?!! i knife...in her head!!!! great story neway


Author's Response: I don't know why, but I was feeling rather morbid at the time, and I really wanted a quick death for her rather than a drug out one. Also, I decided adding random elements from DH would be cool, thus Bellatrix and the knife.

Reviewer: mrs_ginnerva_potter
Date: 01/08/08 17:42
Chapter: Prologue

i want to cry abwt ron...ginny (how cud u?)...charlie...percy....but i like how u made things work out. nice story

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 12/16/07 17:43
Chapter: Chapter 1: Hermione Remembers

W-O-W. That is pretty much the only words I could think of to describe this story and your ability to write. I just had to listen to this song before I read the story and it is a very good song for this story. You are a very descriptive writer. I hardly flinch at anything but reading the description of ginny's death...I flinched. I wanted to cry when you described Harry's sadness at Ginny's death and Hermione's at Ron's. I cannot wait for this to be updated. You are a very gifted writer and I hope that you never stop writing.

**Emma

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 10/07/07 10:24
Chapter: Prologue

Hello again, it's your beta, dear! I see you put up the beta'd chapter... good job! Can't wait to see the rest on the site, dear! *huggles* xxvictoria

Reviewer: hpfan_1212
Date: 09/28/07 9:54
Chapter: Prologue

its good great ending but when are uu gonna finish it?

Author's Response: I've actually got quite a lot more written. It's just a matter of getting it approved. I submitted the next chapter, and it was denied. I've made some changes and resubmitted it. It should be up in the next day or so..(crosses fingers).

Reviewer: dark_chocolate
Date: 09/26/07 18:17
Chapter: Prologue

i like it i really do

Reviewer: prep228
Date: 09/08/07 7:03
Chapter: Prologue

hey whens the next chapter comin?

Author's Response: Well, apparently it didn't make it last time I submitted it, so I've got some more things to fix that my beta didn't catch. (Yep, from here on out, it's beta read!) Not her fault, though.

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 08/14/07 11:30
Chapter: Prologue

Wow. Very nice first chapter.. I really liked it. I can't wait to see what happens once they start living together. Please post another chapter soon.

Reviewer: lil_pumpkin
Date: 08/13/07 10:28
Chapter: Prologue

Very Interesting, but SO many Wasly deaths, I almost couldn't bear to read it... Glad I did, though. Guilty lovers makes a great premise for a story... Please don't be offended, but I did notice some spelling mistakes, including a character name.

Author's Response: Nope, no offense. I'm honestly dyslexic and didn't have the books to check her name by when I was writing this. Honestly, I nearly spelled dyslexic as dislexic a second ago. Thank you, spell check... ;)

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