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Name: PeaceLovePotter (Signed) · Date: 08/19/08 10:28 · For: Chapter 6
I like the story so far, and can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: hey! i'm glad you're enjoying it. I have already started school (drag) but i'll be trying to work on the next chapter this weekend, so look forward to having it soon.~Lily

Name: Prongsies_Girl_93 (Signed) · Date: 07/28/08 20:11 · For: Chapter 6
Sirius is my favourite. But Carolyn is pretty cool. And James.
And, (fine!) Lily. I guess.

Author's Response: haha. that's something i would do. =). glad you like them (all). thanks for reviewing! i hope to have the next chapter ready soon. ~Lily

Name: Nivnami (Signed) · Date: 07/27/08 12:22 · For: Chapter 6
Great chappie!!! You have done an AMAZING job!! I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter!


Author's Response: thanks for the review! and you just made my day by being so enthusiastic about my chapter! Thanks. =D~Lily

Name: weasleyalltheway (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 23:40 · For: Chapter 6
I thought this was a pretty good story apart from it being perhaps just a TINY BIT bland to say it nicely. i enjoyed the part where james was under the cloak, and I wish I could watch james' brilliant plan unfold. It could've done with just a LITTLE more story in it but it is very good nonetheless. i would love to hear your thoughts on my story although i'm not so sure that it is published yet. I believe it would be under James and lily in romance, and it is called "didn't see that coming" by weasleyalltheway. thankyou.

Author's Response: thanks for the review. i understand that the chapter was a little...bland. i just didn't want to give the plan away yet. and i'll totally read and review your story. i hope you keep reading and reviewing. thanks again. ~wanderingLily

Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 07/22/08 9:26 · For: Chapter 6
I really like James' plan!! I can't wait to see what he is doing inn front of the dungeons. Maybe apologize to Snape? Hm....so many options, I can't wait to see what you come up with! Great job!

Author's Response: thanks for the review. I'm glad that you like his plan, and as for the dungeons...well, you'll just have to wait and see. =)

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 15:25 · For: Chapter 6
Urgh!(bashes head off desk several times - ouch) What on earth is he thinking? Just ask her out, in a normal, none showy way, is that really so hard (starts to moan in exasperation) Sorry, just had to get that out. This was yet another brilliant chapter, and i still love James, despite his being a clueless dope. I'm just dreading this very complex multi stage plan going wrong, although if it did and James had to leave Lily alone forever, then she'd have to make all the running. I wonder, was that Caroline's secret plan? She knows James' plan won't come off so she makes him promise never to attempt to date Lily ever again, thereby ensuring that Lily will miss him even more and take the initiative herself. Either way, it'll be one not to miss. Oh and before I leave off, I loved the way you wrote Sirius and James', it really feels as though they're real, does that make sense?

Author's Response: To me, James would never take the simple path. He could just go up and say, "Hey will you go out with me?" but where would the fun in that be? He likes adventure and going a little overboard. And it wasn't Carolyn's plan to make it so that Lily would have to step up, though that would be a rather fun plot twist. Now that you suggest it, I'm sort of considering changing directions with the next chapter...hmmm...i might have to ponder. But anywho, thanks for the complement on James and Sirius. I'm pretty sure i know what you mean, but you might have forgotten a word, so i'm not 100% positive. I really liked writing the exchange between the two of them in the common room (especially when Sirius is suggesting ludicrous ideas and james is just agreeing =D) Ok, thanks for reviewing and being patient for the chapter to finally get posted. I'll try to get the next one up ASAP, though you might not believe me after the long wait between the last one and this one. Keep reading and reviewing. It's always nice to hear from the readers. If you have an idea for something you'd like to see, just let me know and i'll see if i can work it in. ~wanderingLily

Name: xoxoZMHxo (Signed) · Date: 07/20/08 13:17 · For: Chapter 6
ohhhhh good chapter

Author's Response: thanks. took long enough to post though, didn't it? =)

Name: JOXXY (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 19:06 · For: Chapter 5
WanderingLily, where are you? It seems like its been forever since you posted. I was just going through my favorites, and I had for gotten you amazing story? Will you ever finish it?

Author's Response: I'm still here and I have every intention of finishing. I have no good excuse for the months that it has been but lately I've been dealing with some personal stuff. Don't give up on me yet.rn~Lily

Name: Oh_No_Not_Fred (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 1:08 · For: Chapter 5
oh oh oh please update soon!

I love this story it's so cute & i just wish there was another 100 chapters because I can't get enough!

Author's Response: thanks for the review. sorry it's been so long but you have to understand why i haven't updated...at least in the last few weeks. I had SATs, AP testing, and next week are finals so people want tutoring from me. But i'll be wonderful and go edit and write, okay. keep reading.rnrn~Lily

Name: GryffindorGals (Signed) · Date: 02/28/08 15:30 · For: Chapter 5
Wonderful! We're so glad you finally got up to submitting this chapter! Please post the next one very soon. The wait is already killing us!

Happy Writing : )

~Alana&Hannah {The GryffindorGals}

Author's Response: I'm really happy you like it! and i think it's cool that you share the login name. I don't have much homework today (yeah for the block schedule) so i'll try to work on the next chapter after that. Keep on reading! Lily

Name: JeeviS (Signed) · Date: 02/23/08 13:17 · For: Chapter 5
the story is really great!! Plz keep updating... cant wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: glad you like it! i'll update ASAP! ~Lily

Name: heartachin4harry (Signed) · Date: 02/18/08 21:41 · For: Chapter 5
I knew it! I knew James was under the cloak!!! Great chapter, I lkoved it, especially with Lily opening up to Sirius. Update soon!

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it. It seems agreed upon that the cloak was good, and I was a little nervous about it so i'm glad. I'll update ASAP.

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 02/16/08 16:33 · For: Chapter 5
Excellent! I love the invisibility cloak! I wonder if James will ask Lily out or wait and see if she does it first. And will she ever know he was listening? She'll probably guess when they get together and she knows he's got the cloak. Anyway, congratulations on another great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks for the excitement. it really was you that got me to get off my butt and edit so i could post. and all your wondering has given me ideas. thanks! keep reading and reviewing and i hope you continue to enjoy it. ~Lily

Name: Prongsies_Girl_93 (Signed) · Date: 02/15/08 17:03 · For: Chapter 5
i friggin knew it!!!! Especially after the hand thing... lol, nice! can't wait for the next chapter!!! *crosses fingers that it will be soon*

Author's Response: hehe. glad you enjoyed it. i really liked writing the hand part. i'll try to update soon. Keep on reading and reviewing. ~Lily

Name: Secrets4life (Signed) · Date: 02/15/08 6:24 · For: Chapter 5
like it a lot-pls update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks for the review. I'll update ASAP. ~Lily

Name: lily_death_flower (Signed) · Date: 02/13/08 16:26 · For: Chapter 5
OMG! yayyy he knows! and Lily finally admits her feelings even if she doesnt knmow that james knows. please update faster next time!!!

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it. and I kept trying to update but all the glitches MNFF kept getting in the way. I'm also sorry to say that it might be a while before the next chapter because i've got an essay due (which I almost had to retype the whole thing today!) thanks for the review! ~Lily

Name: mugglechicka5565 (Signed) · Date: 01/23/08 18:56 · For: Chapter 1
i am probably not the first to say this but his eyes are hazel

Author's Response: ummm...actually you are. but thanks for the review. ~Lily

Name: Vicster (Signed) · Date: 01/17/08 18:05 · For: Chapter 4
Your story is really good so far! the way you write James's character is just how i always imagined him! JAMES AND LILY NEED TO GET TOGETHER SOON! haha keep up with the story its getting really intersting.

Author's Response: glad that you like the story. And trust me when I say, they will be together soon. Just wait for the next chapter! I'll submit it right after this. thanks for the review! i really like suggestions. ~Lily

Name: lily_death_flower (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 14:54 · For: Chapter 4
i love james. he's so sweet and funny. good chappie. hope to see a new one soon this one was too small

Author's Response: hehe. i'm glad you like james. the next chapter is ready, i just need to read through it one last time and then i'll submit it. i think that one might be longer than this one was... and Melissa (the beta, not the first year lol) seemed to like it. i know i liked writing it...especially one part that you'll just have to wait for. thanks for the review. ~Lily

Name: daffy (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 3:16 · For: Chapter 4
where have u been!!?????
n dat chap was kinda small... i was soo dissapointed to c the review box appear so soon.....
but neverthless it was amazingly cute... cant wait for more.... though i think lily's suddden change of heart shud be more explained n not so ubrupt!!... maybe some letters over the summer or somethin...
but then its ur baby..... m just the babysitter!!!
good work... hope the updates are more often... coz cant wait really!!

Author's Response: thanks for the imput. the chapter seemed longer than usual for my writing, but melissa said it was rather short too. as for where i've been...there's this thing called school...and then there's something even better called finals! YAY TESTS! so i was studying and and then--as i said in the author's note--i was going to post it before the queues closed but it was magically deleted (or eaten by hippogriffs). and then to your complaint about abruptness...who says that there isn't more to it then what is there so far? the backstory has not quite made it in...and though i had not really thought of how abrupt it was, maybe i will consider adding more of a back story to this "baby" of mine. i'll work on updating ASAP...the next chapter is already written (unless i'm confused, which is common) anywho, hope you like the next one. ~Lily

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