Reviewer: Old Weasly
Date: 09/01/11 8:38
Chapter: Chapter 23: A Beginning, an End, and A Bend

All I can say is WOW.. I am an older Harry Potter fan and not knowing the ages of the writers, I find myself guessing at it by the writing style and content. You are a very good writer this story was entertaining with great depth of character and plot. I truely enjoyed this and hope very much to see yet another bend in Harry's future..

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 14:19
Chapter: Chapter 23: A Beginning, an End, and A Bend

Job well done. Thank you for this story.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 13:51
Chapter: Chapter 22: Ron's Redemption

Great job Ron. I knew you had it in you. No longer just a sidekick. You're the man.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 13:41
Chapter: Chapter 21: The Witching Hour

Wow. I didn't think you'd be able to bring that jumble around. Billows, Krum, Snape. It was a little convoluted but you brought it all together. Nice job. No offense intended but I am glad to see Aurora go.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 13:18
Chapter: Chapter 20: The Fallout


Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 13:04
Chapter: Chapter 19: A Desperate Revelation

Oh heck. it's out there now. One perfectly good engagement gone up in smoke.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 11:44
Chapter: Chapter 18: Couples Interrupted

Oh yes. Things are really getting interesting now. I'm still a little confused by this Snape-Voldemort-Aurora thing. But that makes it that much more interesting.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 17: A Twist of Fate

Great chapter. I loved the humor, baked into a meat pie; blew his eyebrow off. Fit in well in this interesting chapter. Thanks.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 16: A Dire Ending

WHAT!!!!!! Where is this coming from?

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 10:45
Chapter: Chapter 15: Draco's Despair

Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 10:32
Chapter: Chapter 14: A Very Unmerry Sleigh Ride

Please tell me that one of the three is going to tumble to the fact that Aurora is much more than she pretends. This amnesia, what did I just do thing can only be hidden for so long. Yeah for Ron coming to the rescue. LOL. Death Eaters falling like flies.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 3:59
Chapter: Chapter 13: A Chance Encounter

Even in the best fairy tale Alexis and Amycus speaking Russian is a stretch. They could barely speak English. Thank you hermione for paying attention. She is onto Aurora even if she really doesn't know why yet. Good girl. Hermione.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 3:41
Chapter: Chapter 12: The Runaway Train

Come on Hermione. The seed has been planted and I'm not talking about you and Ron's baby. You know there's something off about Aurora. Pay attention. Or, maybe Ron will see it first because he doesn't like Aurora much. The mother/daughter horcrux thing is an interesting theory.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/31/11 3:21
Chapter: Chapter 11: Mystery on The Trans-Siberian Express

Enough with the Harry chose someone over her. She wss a cheap date. She needs to get used to it. I know it will work out in the end but I feel so sorry for Ginny. When Ginny finds out about Harry's baby it will probably look to her like Ron, Hermione, Charlie and Harry have been playing her false. It will probably seem that she can't trust anyone. I really don't like Aurora.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/30/11 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 10: Hard Times at Auror Academy

If she hurts Charlie, I'll burn this book. LOL,

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/30/11 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 9: A Plan Hatched

No offense intended and I already realize that harry and Ginny may never marry because of Aurora and ireland but I hope that this book doesn't end with Aurora surviving. She and Harry shagged at one his worst moments (not sticking up for him) and she thinks that he's her man. FH and the horse she rode in on.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/30/11 14:36
Chapter: Chapter 8: Hermione''s First Client

Hooray for my girl Hermione. Always true to her word. Sorry you saw fit to kill off Kingsley. Sad about that. So much going on. hose body id Voldemort using. Is it him or Snape doing the dirty deeds?. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/30/11 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 6: Vladimir and Voldemort

Voldemort is back. I don't like Aurora, but that's just me. Nice chapter.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/30/11 7:04
Chapter: Chapter 5: The Duel

This poot is going to ruin everything for Harry and Ginny. What a crock. Anyway, Voldermort appears to have been conquered, Harry is now just another auror-in-training. He needs to get over himself a bit and follow orders. Of course, this may be an auror trick to see just who will follow them. Nah. I think not.

Reviewer: oliverwood1993
Date: 03/17/09 1:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: Past and Present

really good story! you should write a story about charlie after aurora died...

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