Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 05/25/08 13:58
Chapter: Chapter One

Ooh, I loved it! I can count the number of AUs I've read on one hand, but this was great! I'd really love to see more--are you ever going to update? I liked Hermione's character and I thought it was cute how Fred, George and Lee sort of babied her. I like the idea of F.G. and L. being friends with Harry and Hermione. And, though I'm fundamentally against H/Hr, I think a very cute pairing could arise from this story. Please update!!!

Reviewer: SIRIUS WILL NOT DIE
Date: 08/21/07 19:09
Chapter: Chapter One

I really like this! I think I may have reviewed before, but I don't remember. I wish you would continue it. I liked the fact that Ron doesn't have a big part, because Ron has always annoyed me. I love the idea of Hermione being more spirited, but still Hermione. Most stories where her personality is different, its like she's not even Hermione anymore.

Really great job!

~Emma

Reviewer: RockinBaby
Date: 04/06/07 19:12
Chapter: Chapter One

No updates since '04?

:(

Reviewer: dumbledores daughter
Date: 02/18/07 16:29
Chapter: Chapter One

Like it, love it want there to be a sequal oh wonderful master of words and conjunctions!

Reviewer: vikkidragon
Date: 09/04/06 21:52
Chapter: Chapter One

COME ON!!! WHERE IN THE WORLD IS THE REST OF THE STORY?!

Reviewer: vikkidragon
Date: 07/23/06 23:37
Chapter: Chapter One

This is the funniest one I have seen yet. Seriously. Honestly. Absolutely- some one stop me!

Reviewer: wishiwereaweasley
Date: 02/05/06 23:07
Chapter: Chapter One

Me again. I just read your summary again and realised I missed the whole point. Sorry! So now that I know you won't be playing up Ron, how did you get the idea of using the twins as a vehicle for Harry and Hermione's relationship? Can't wait to see what's coming!

Reviewer: wishiwereaweasley
Date: 02/05/06 23:06
Chapter: Chapter One

This was very interesting. I was just wondering where you got the idea...was it just what you wanted to have happen, or did something trigger it? I think you have an excellent grasp of Fred and George, that's for sure. Are you planning to play up Ron a little more? He seems a little bit absent to me. Like you said, Hermione is very OOC, but that's okay. I'm looking forward to seeing how her change of character is going to affect the rest of the plot. Good start!

Reviewer: RavenKath
Date: 08/18/05 15:00
Chapter: Chapter One

i liked this. it was pretty different from the actual book of course, but that was the point! anyways, i think that your OOC Hermione was the Hermione who is actually hiding under the "follow-the-rules" Hermione of canon. Most people have at least a bit of your Hermione's sauciness in them, and you did a great job bringing hers out.

Reviewer: Forgotten_Twilight
Date: 03/13/05 14:57
Chapter: Chapter One

I really liked it. It was a lot less serious then your other stories, not that they are bad. I think I might like that better then the Original story. Anyways bravo!

Reviewer: x2pttrclue32
Date: 01/25/05 9:37
Chapter: Chapter One

That was really good. I liked how you made Hermione...was it Fred and George's queen? Oh well. I think that you did it just right with the OOCness too. But Ron.....I know he was supposed to be in the backround, but it seemed to much to me... Great job though!

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 12/21/04 17:19
Chapter: Chapter One

the story is really great so far. even though hermione is a little out of character i kind of like her that way, its nice to see characters different every once and a while. the twins are still funny. i also like how you take things out of the actual book to help your story. my favorite scene was probably potions class, because harry got all the questions right instead of wrong.

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 12/20/04 9:59
Chapter: Chapter One

Hi nice job. I just want to make one suggestion. When taking quotes from Sorcers stone. I would just maybe put them in quote marks or italize them so we know that your taking directly from the book. Ex what snape starts class... just my thoughts.

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