Reviews For Weeks and Weeks
Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 08/07/07 18:35
Chapter: Chapter 2

aww poor ron...good story

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 08/07/07 10:31
Chapter: Chapter 2

Poor Ron, I really like how you characterized him and wrote his thought. Good job.

Reviewer: Cineris_Anima
Date: 08/06/07 23:02
Chapter: Chapter 2

Really great, I love the way you take Ron's point of view. I loved the nightmare, it was very like Ron :)

Reviewer: FreeRaven
Date: 08/06/07 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 2

Okay, so you'll stop after he joins back up with Harry and Hermione. Cool beans! I love this so far. I really enjoy Ron's POV and you are channeling JKR's canon characteristics once more! Hmm...let's see, I really liked Fleur's kiss, that was original but so right. And, Ron's contemplation of just crashing into the sea...wow, that was good. Keep it up, can't wait!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 08/06/07 10:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 08/05/07 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was very well-written. I loved the way you told how he felt. Very good job.

Reviewer: weasleymomotwins
Date: 08/05/07 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good, can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/05/07 20:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, poor Ron! I'm so glad you are writing these missing moments from when Ron left Harry and Hermione. I couldn't believe he did, and yet in the end it made sense. I'm looking forward to reading what he did in those weeks.
I like how you wrote this from Ron's POV because it gives us a really deep look into his thoughts. I already feel bad for him.
I can't wait to see what you do with the Deluminator, because frankly that really confused me!
Nice start and good luck as you continue!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: It really upset me when he left, but from a story and character standpoint, I understood why it had to happen. He had to battle those demons if he was going to be effective for Harry, as he needed to be when Harry got sidetracked, and he also need to let go of those fears in order to be the man Hermione needed/deserved. And from the story standpoint, the trio really needed some connection to the wizarding world that they had become isolated from. Since Ron was always that 'connection' in the past, being the only one raised as a wizard, it had to be him to provide the link. I hope you enjoyed the rest!

Reviewer: Tohon
Date: 08/05/07 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good story.

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 08/05/07 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is excellent! Update soon, please.

Reviewer: mariami
Date: 08/05/07 14:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great start! I was waiting for someone to write a fic about what Ron went through when he was gone, and I think you did a fantastic job. I can't wait to see what you do with this story next. For now it's in my favorites.

Reviewer: maze
Date: 08/05/07 0:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great start! As always your story is captivating. Though we know what has happen,you are able to hold your readers interest. I'm happy that we have Ron's point of view. Looking forward for your updates.

Author's Response: Thanks! They should be coming pretty shortly!

Reviewer: DobbyElf
Date: 08/05/07 0:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

I started reading and then stopped as soon as I realized it was in first person

Reviewer: FreeRaven
Date: 08/05/07 0:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, interesting this POV of Deathly Hallows! I haven't seen much of this missing moment--referring to Ron's departure and ordeal thereafter. You have a good grasp on Ron's canon character and I look forward to more of this exciting new original (thanks of course to JKR!). Tell me, will you continue this forward into the story or just until Ron returns back to Harry and Hermione?

Author's Response: This will go up to the point where Ron finds Harry. I didn't see any point in re-writing what's already in the book. Just because I'm happy to read it 500 times, doesn't mean everyone else is :-D

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