This story was recommended by WeasleyMom and I am so glad that I took the time to read it! You dont see many stories from Ron's POV and I enjoyed seeing the emotions he went through being away from Hermione and Harry. Thanks for sharing, wonderful job!
I really enjoyed this fic. Poor Ron! You wrote his angst very well, and I liked his interactions with Bill and Fleur, too. Great job.
No comments on this fic in over two years! Wow. I'm so glad I stumbled into this. It's just a wonderful look through Ron's eyes, in character and very well written. Love the Shell Cottage stuff with Bill and Fleur. Don't know if you are still around, but I will be looking to see if you have anything more. Thanks!
At the risk of sounding stupid, is this fic finished? It has been dormant for a couple of weeks now. I quite liked it.
this was so good! I saw the banner in your siggy, and it was temtping me for weeks and weeks! (no pun intended) I finally looked at it and its awesome! awesome job Andrea! :D
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much and I'm glad you got around to taking the plunge (also no pun intended). ;-)
aw poor poor ron! He certainly feels terrible. That nightmare would have been awful! Please write again soon.
aw. poor ron. This really sees through his eyes. Well Done!
Great story! You've written Ron's PoV very well. I really do love him. You also worked in a lot of little details very nicely; I liked the bit about the wedding. So what do you think was going on with the Deluminator leading him back to Harry and Hermione? That's one thing I don't get.
Hope your other stories are coming along well!
Author's Response: Thanks, Gina! Hmm...well, it's pretty clear to me that the Deluminator was enchanted with a pretty powerful locator or guiding spell that allowed the holder to find their way back to their loved ones. But it seems that it would only work if everyone, in their hearts, wanted to be reunited. Here, I was sort of envisioning the Deluminator also kind of enhancing the connection between the trio - that's why Ron was having those kind of foreboding feelings. It seems fitting that Dumbledore had created this object - I can see him worrying about conflict with Aberforth and wanting to have a way back to his family. I think in that way, he saw himself in Ron and that's why Dumbledore gave it to him.
Poor Ron - you did a good job with his sad and guilty thoughts after leaving Harry and Hermione. You also had just the right hint of jealously as well. The dream at the end was very good!
Really nicely written. I think you captured Ron's inner turmoil beautifully. Thanks!
i`m LOVING this fic
THAT WAS AWESOME.
lol. i always wanted to hear more details of what ron did when he was separted with harry and hermione and now i know..! well anyway, great chapter!
Your story is so believable.I really feel so sorry for Ron.Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Eek, will you be terribly upset for me to tell you that the story is done? However, I am considering doing another 'missing moment' fic centering on Ron and Hermione when they went down into the Chamber of Secrets, and possibly when Ron found out that Fred had died. So, don't be too cross with me!
Author's Response: And, Thank you!!
Awesome story! Just how I imagined how Ron would feel when he left.
I really loved this fic. I thought you captured Ron very well. And Bill and Fleur's encouragement and how they brought up Ron's past deeds, was brilliant. Amazing Job.
Very good. You captured his soulfullness perfectly.
This story was wonderful. I love the last line: "I had made it home just in time."
Applause is all you deserve, Ravensgryff. Good job. Another masterpiece.
Author's Response: I'm certain that's the first time I've ever seen the word masterpiece in relation to my work! *blushes* Thanks very much!!
I like this story from Ron's POV, good job! One question though, wouldn't your summary talking about Ron leaving Harry and Hermione be considered a spoiler?
Author's Response: OMG!! Duh! You're right! Thanks!