mmmmmmm........ so your saying there was an unrecorded person there. interesting *puts fingers together* very interesting, i'll keep my eyes open for the second chapter
Oooh! I can't wait to read more!
very nice story! i love the idea youre going with. cant wait till you post something about the twins!
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha Thnx I love your story too!
I like this, so far. Your writing is good. (It seemed a little halting at the beginning, but picked up as the chapter went on.) I'm looking forward to reading this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad u like it.
Interesting... I think this is good portrayal of the Peverells, and it will be interesting to see how it ties in with the Post-Hogwarts world, especially the shadow's choice. Maybe the shadow wants to escape immortality? I dunno, just a theory.
Author's Response: Interesting idea... But I'm not giving anything away, let's just says it's the most obvious, and therefore the last thing you'll think of (Hopefully) :)