Reviews For A Proper Goodbye
Reviewer: Griffgurl7
Date: 08/05/07 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. It's amazing how a tragity can change people. Your story was beautiful! I am seriously crying right now!

Author's Response: Sorry to make you cry, but I'm glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 08/05/07 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was very good. I liked how you included Draco, it was unexpected but something I think Harry would have done. Very good job, this was a wonderful fic.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I really thought that Draco had a right to be there and Harry wouldn't want to do it alone.

Reviewer: AshleyxSlytherin
Date: 08/05/07 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was lovely. Made me tear up a bit...I only wish something like this would've happened in the that I would've had immediate comfort. It was great, really.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it and found it comforting. I really think Severus' death needed more closure.

Reviewer: Habook2
Date: 08/05/07 17:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

An interesting piece, kind of short, but very good. Plausible, as well. The one thing I notice is the ending - no offense, but it sounds kind of cheesy. I would have also removed the "a" before "home." Do you say "I'm going to my home," or do you say "I'm going home."?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll take a second look at the ending.

Reviewer: hicktib
Date: 08/05/07 15:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

A good closing to Snapes life. I Like the story very much.

A couple of small spelling errors, Rewording instead of rewarding.

Keep writing, You are dong a great job

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. And yes, I really need to fix rewording...

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 08/05/07 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniffles* I'm not going to cry, I'm not going to cry . . .

Wow. I just absolutely loved this. It's nice to think that Harry went back to Severus' body afterwards and finally had some closure with him. A very sweet piece. Amazing job, Elle. I just have one nit-pick:

And all I can do is hope your afterlife is more peaceful and rewording than the one you lived here.

I think it should be rewarding, not rewording. :)

Author's Response: Rewording...shakes head

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. I think it was important for both Harry and Draco to have some closure with Severus, although I don't think this was the way they were meant to get it. Poor Sevy should have lived.

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 08/05/07 13:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: mrsginny_potter
Date: 08/05/07 13:33
Chapter: Chapter 1


Author's Response: *hands tissue*

Reviewer: Nairobidawn
Date: 08/05/07 13:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was wonderful!!! I could so see that happening! I love the emotion in it, it almost made me cry! I hope he rests in peace.

Author's Response: Severus deserves some peace. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: mariami
Date: 08/05/07 13:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved this! This is the first fic I read about Snape post-DH, and it was really well written. I think Jo would had written something similar. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: fishstep
Date: 08/05/07 12:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent. I am enjoying all the post-DH Snape stories folks are writing, and your is one of the best. I appreciate that you thought to include Draco!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really felt that Draco needed to be there. He owed Severus too.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 08/05/07 12:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* SNAPE ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope that harry really DID do that in dH!!

Author's Response: Snape does indeed rock. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/05/07 11:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

i realy think thatis how J.K. would have done it :) good job

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/05/07 9:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice job, Elle! I'm glad to see Snape get his due - and to see Harry and Draco offer their respects together. Good job with them, and the story!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Gina. I'm glad you liked it. I really thought Harry and Draco owed Severus something and this was all they could do for him.

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 08/05/07 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved it!
It was written very well.
It's very emotional.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 08/05/07 9:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

aw... thats' good. I love the way they payed their respects. That was touching.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: chitra
Date: 08/05/07 8:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

This scene was quite likeable. I couldn't help but feel a pang of indignance that JK never told us what happened with Snape's body. I am glad that you did so.

Author's Response: I had a discussion about what happened to Severus' body with another fan. She was very upset that no one went to find him. So that is how this little one-shot was born.

Thank you for leaving a review.

Reviewer: num
Date: 08/05/07 8:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a beautiful missing moment

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 08/05/07 6:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Just wanted to say that this is a very short yet moving story! I love it. The respect that Harry + Draco gave to Snape was quite tearful
Well done

This is in my favourites!


Author's Response: Thanks so much. I just thought it was about time Severus got some respect.

Reviewer: Medusa
Date: 08/05/07 6:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

It's great! I really could imagine this scene like that - well done! Not too teary, very much in character!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Epithalamium by Squibstress Professors
Minerva McGonagall is a bright, talented witch with dreams of becoming the first...
Not From Others by FloreatCastellum 6th-7th Years
She may not have been able to join Harry, Ron and Hermione, but Ginny refuses...
The Marred Boy by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
The two Marauders who were outcasts in their own homes. I am Padfoot11333...
Twilit Confessions by ahattab33 3rd-5th Years
After returning from Australia with the Grangers, Ron realises the moment to...
Soul Sister by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
Ted and Andromeda have just eloped. So, they dance. A songfic featuring...
Time and Tide by minnabird 6th-7th Years
Filius has seen her all his life: the Woman. She has been drifting through time...
Footprints in the Sand by Equinox Chick 6th-7th Years
It was a summer like any other for Danny. He worked at his parents' Bed and...
Consolation by Gmariam 3rd-5th Years
For years, Remus Lupin found comfort in the arms of Rosmerta Richardson...until...
Dangerous Liaisons by eternalangel 6th-7th Years
It was a dangerous game she was playing; Dorcas Meadowes knew it, but the exhilaration...