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Reviews For A Proper Goodbye

Name: HexFang145 (Signed) · Date: 06/13/12 0:47 · For: Chapter 1
I cried while reading this...thats a good thing. :) great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Name: Bella Got Bite (Signed) · Date: 07/17/11 19:01 · For: Chapter 1
Very well written and would have fit in the book very nicely :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: tatjanablack (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 9:15 · For: Chapter 1
I don't think I have wrote you a review on this one - at least I can't find it. I just got into HP mood a few days ago and then I have started to read your fanfics agian:

Well this is a great one too. You are one of my favorite writers. :)

(By the way I don't think I have seen any recently written by you. Have you stopped writing fanfic?)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like my stories.

And yes, I have stopped writing fanfic. At least, for the time-being. But you never know, I might get into it again some day.

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 07/15/08 18:23 · For: Chapter 1
It doesn't matter how many times i read this, it still makes me want to cry. This is on my gap fillers list of missing moments from canon and I hope JKR had something like this in mind too.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Your compliments really mean a lot.

Name: Bella Got Bite (Signed) · Date: 03/09/08 18:08 · For: Chapter 1
This is the best thing I have read so far in my life. I only wish that this could by the last chapter of DH.

Author's Response: Wow! That's a compliment. Thanks so much.

Name: moonstargazer (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 13:12 · For: Chapter 1
I just came across your story while searching for another and I must say it is beautiful. Very simply staed and very touching.
It brought a tear to my eyes.

Author's Response: :D Thanks. I'm glad you found it so touching.

Name: A H (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 2:43 · For: Chapter 1
Excellent story. I haven't been able to find one, out of the hundreds here on MNFF, that begins directly after the Battle of Hogwarts.

I must admit that I don't see Harry actually saying any final words, but your dialog was beautiful. Draco's as well.

It was short and sweet, and very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Name: rwluver (Signed) · Date: 12/10/07 19:42 · For: Chapter 1
awe, that was a nice fan fic!!!!! kind of sad but nice

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 11/26/07 17:38 · For: Chapter 1
I'm glad you wrote this, I did wonder what would happen to Snape after the battle, people retrieved the dead from the grounds but nobody mentioned him. It's truly ironic that Harry only understood Snape once he was gone, although even if Snape had survived and Harry'd been able to express his gratitude I sincerely doubt that Snape could've accepted it. And involving Draco too, another great irony that he and Harry performed this solumn task together. Anyway, thanks for caring enough about Snape to bring him home.

Author's Response: *cuddles Sevy* I love him. Thanks so much for the review.

Name: Welshgreengrl (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 21:01 · For: Chapter 1
omg tears are forming in my eyes as i am typing this cuz this is just such a beautiful story!! thanks for writing it!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: tc015 (Signed) · Date: 10/27/07 21:50 · For: Chapter 1
Wow. That was amazing

I loved that Harry took the incentive to give Snape a proper burial. I thought that it was odd that no one seemed to remember to grab Snape in the Shrieking Shack. It's was a relief to see that someone was coming back for him. It shows a bit of Harry's nobility; I don't think that Harry would want to leave Snape to rot there.

I really liked that Harry thought to bring Draco with him to the Shrieking Shack. Snape did do a lot for Draco, so Draco would want to honor Snape's memory. It also shows Harry's maturity; even though the two never got along, Harry still thought to bring him along.

Slowly, he approached the blonde family. They were so wrapped up in each other that they didn’t notice him. He hesitated slightly, wondering if this was really the best time to interupt.
I love this image of the Black family. Even though they might be on Voldemort's side, they still loved each other. I think that Malfoys definitely love each other, and I love seeing that family image of them.(Oh, there should be a second r in interrupt.)

“I should go with you,” Draco muttered. “He saved my life, and I was a prat. I can’t believe I was afraid he would steal my glory. How childish I was then.”

“We all were,” Harry told him. “This year has changed us all.”

I loved this part. It really shows how much both Harry and Draco have matured. The fact that Draco is willing to admit his mistake of not trusting Snape shows how much he has changed; he's no longer the cowardly bully, but a mature, young man. Harry realizes this, and you can begin to see that they are beginning to accept each other.

I love Draco's and Harry's little eulogies for Snape. It was interesting how similiar they both were. Both Harry and Draco didn't trust Snape right away. It took Snape's death for them to realize what a good man he was. You can tell that Draco and Harry do want to honor his legacy. I wouldn't be surprised if the two of them worked together to get Snape's portrait in the Headmaster's office.

I love how the fic resolved several issues from book. It showed how Draco and Harry were beginning to gain an acceptance for each other. It also resolved the issue of Snape's burial. It really helped to add closure to the end of DH.

~ Teresa

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the truly amazing review.

Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 09/30/07 7:39 · For: Chapter 1
People don't see who eachother really are until it's too late, by then there's nothing we can do.
-A line of wisdom said by me.

Author's Response: That often seems to be the case.

Name: Gary Potter (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 22:08 · For: Chapter 1
A great story that I hope many people will give a try at. There are so many DH side stories and post stories I hope everyone gives a shot. You did a great job

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

Name: Lunar_Essence (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 9:11 · For: Chapter 1
It was time to return Snape to the one place he considered a home–Hogwarts.

Fantastic end. I loved the story, made me tear up. A fitting tribute to an extremely brave man. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Name: malteselover (Signed) · Date: 09/01/07 13:13 · For: Chapter 1
Awwwww! How sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: HarryFan24 (Signed) · Date: 08/18/07 11:25 · For: Chapter 1
Very touching. I never though about what would happen to Snape's body. Wonderful writing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: hpobsessed4ever_23 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 15:01 · For: Chapter 1
good story! =)

Author's Response: Thank you.

Name: DracosBaby_232 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 9:22 · For: Chapter 1
::crying:: that is so sad! When I read DH I couldn't believe that Snape was dead and now I'm reliving it over again.

Author's Response: *hands tissue* *huggles poor Sevy*

Name: Curious77 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/07 3:49 · For: Chapter 1
that was nice

Author's Response: Thank you.

Name: cyt_potter (Signed) · Date: 08/14/07 14:55 · For: Chapter 1
I must honestly say that I was never very fond of Snape, but now at the end of DH, I see that in his own way he did try to help, and protect Harry. A heart felt thank-you for writing such a fitting good-by to him. I think he would of been... thankful for the quiet good-by from Harry and Draco.

Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope Severus does like his tribute.

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