Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/23/07 15:07
Chapter: Chapter Five

So the necklace does have to do with Fred being back. I still think it also has something to do with the Bandersnatch murder, too. It was good of Dumbeldore to give Fred the hint that he had somthing to do with it, although he was extremely cryptic. And I laughed so hard at this part, it was definitely my favorite bit of the whole chapter:
"Wow." George's eyes widened. "Are you thinking what I'm thinking?"

"When am I ever not?"

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I loved that bit too!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/15/07 7:04
Chapter: Chapter Four

I knew it! The beads have to do with George seeing Fred. Now that George took the beads off, will Fred come back?
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Ah, well, you'll just have to read on and see... Thank you ;o)

Reviewer: ebohlman
Date: 09/13/07 17:03
Chapter: Chapter Four

Excellent story! I can't wait for the next installment.

By the third paragraph I had figured it was the necklace; George's misgivings make it seem like he must have heard the tale of the three brothers long ago but only vaguely remembers it. I rather doubt Harry is going to be pleased when he finds out what's been going on.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Keep reading to find out whether your predictions are correct ;o)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/10/07 13:46
Chapter: Chapter Four


Author's Response: Will do... thanks.

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 09/09/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter Four

awwww... the end was so sad. =[ Buuuut an amazing chapter! wow, you're too good with mysteries :D definitely keep going, cant wait for the next chapter :] its getting so interesting

Author's Response: Thank you very much ;o)

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/09/07 15:07
Chapter: Chapter Four

Wow, I can't wait to find out what happened to Fred. I'm going to guess it has something to do with the necklace. And if it does, and the necklace has the power to bring people back from the dead, or make them visible to the wearer or something, than I'm also going to guess that that was the important thing the people were trying to steal from the Quidditch guy. I love mysteries! Your fic is so exciting! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Ooh... more guessing and questions - excellent! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 09/09/07 11:36
Chapter: Chapter Four

It was the necklace!! That was what was keeping Fred there! George needs to figure it out so he can bring him back! Hurry George! But then again, is it really fair to bring him back? Is it really fair for Fred to be just like air and for George to be living? This is getting complicated, but it is such an exciting story!

Author's Response: Thank you - keep guessing/speculating/reading to find out ;o)

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 09/09/07 10:22
Chapter: Chapter Four

This story is getting really good. Please update soon!

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 09/09/07 10:22
Chapter: Chapter Four

This story is getting really good. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I certainly will. Thanks!

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 09/09/07 0:01
Chapter: Chapter Four

Very good!! Now, its starting to make sense! Aha! It should be exciting to see how their plan turns out!! ~Sara

Author's Response: Thank you ;o)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/05/07 18:37
Chapter: Chapter Three

please update soon!!

Reviewer: Gamma Orionis
Date: 08/31/07 23:34
Chapter: Chapter One

Wow...this is the first Fred & George story I've read...I LOVE the idea of Fred coming back to life, and I'm dying to know have my interest!!!
Poor George. I mean, seriously. I loved that part when Fred said "Forgotten I was dead?" That was hilarious and very raw. It's Puking Pastilles, though, not Puking Pastels (although that looks nice in an alliterative sort of way too!) I'm going to add this to my Favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'm so glad you like it! Cheers for pointing out the Puking Pastilles thing, I don't think I would ever have noticed otherwise. Thanks again ;o)

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 08/28/07 14:13
Chapter: Chapter Three

I like where this is going! The whole who-did-it murder along side George coping with the fact that Fred might or might not be back is exciting in its own way!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! ~Sara

Author's Response: Thank you ;o)

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 08/28/07 13:59
Chapter: Chapter Two

Good chapter!! Sad but still funny. ~Sara

Author's Response: Cheers!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 08/27/07 12:48
Chapter: Chapter Three

I don't usually read mysteries, but I love Fred and George, so I can't wait to see where you go with this. Your writing is absolutely fantastic, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad this story is uniting Fred and George fans who don't usually read mysteries. Updates on the way, don't worry... ;o)

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 08/26/07 20:06
Chapter: Chapter Three

Oh, I thought Angelina would be able to see Fred too. I guess George being the only one seems to make it more interesting. I wonder if any of the others in the family can see him. This private eye thing could get interesting too. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you - all will be revealed in good time ;o)

Reviewer: Everlasting
Date: 08/26/07 16:31
Chapter: Chapter Three

I love how in-character they all are; you do a great job with it. I can't wait for the next chapter =] it's getting so interesting now

Author's Response: Thank you very much - I was so worried I would get the characterisation wrong because I've never written Gred and Forge before. Thanks ;o)

Reviewer: bonbon_13
Date: 08/26/07 15:15
Chapter: Chapter Three

This is definitely one of my favorite fics to be reading nowadays! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: ic0dk0c00
Date: 08/26/07 14:07
Chapter: Chapter Three

I like this story. It reminds me of Randall and Hopkirk Deceased.

Author's Response: I love that programme. Thanks ;o)

Reviewer: radishearrings3
Date: 08/26/07 13:58
Chapter: Chapter Three

This is a great story! I love Fred and George stories, and you managed to write one even when one of them is dead! Your writing style is very clear and Fred and George are very in character! Great job! I can't wait 'till the next chapter is up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

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