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Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/23/07 15:07 · For: Chapter Five
So the necklace does have to do with Fred being back. I still think it also has something to do with the Bandersnatch murder, too. It was good of Dumbeldore to give Fred the hint that he had somthing to do with it, although he was extremely cryptic. And I laughed so hard at this part, it was definitely my favorite bit of the whole chapter:
"Wow." George's eyes widened. "Are you thinking what I'm thinking?"

"When am I ever not?"

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I loved that bit too!

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 7:04 · For: Chapter Four
I knew it! The beads have to do with George seeing Fred. Now that George took the beads off, will Fred come back?
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Ah, well, you'll just have to read on and see... Thank you ;o)

Name: ebohlman (Signed) · Date: 09/13/07 17:03 · For: Chapter Four
Excellent story! I can't wait for the next installment.

By the third paragraph I had figured it was the necklace; George's misgivings make it seem like he must have heard the tale of the three brothers long ago but only vaguely remembers it. I rather doubt Harry is going to be pleased when he finds out what's been going on.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Keep reading to find out whether your predictions are correct ;o)

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/07 13:46 · For: Chapter Four

Author's Response: Will do... thanks.

Name: Everlasting (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 17:41 · For: Chapter Four
awwww... the end was so sad. =[ Buuuut an amazing chapter! wow, you're too good with mysteries :D definitely keep going, cant wait for the next chapter :] its getting so interesting

Author's Response: Thank you very much ;o)

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 15:07 · For: Chapter Four
Wow, I can't wait to find out what happened to Fred. I'm going to guess it has something to do with the necklace. And if it does, and the necklace has the power to bring people back from the dead, or make them visible to the wearer or something, than I'm also going to guess that that was the important thing the people were trying to steal from the Quidditch guy. I love mysteries! Your fic is so exciting! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Ooh... more guessing and questions - excellent! Thanks for the review.

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 11:36 · For: Chapter Four
It was the necklace!! That was what was keeping Fred there! George needs to figure it out so he can bring him back! Hurry George! But then again, is it really fair to bring him back? Is it really fair for Fred to be just like air and for George to be living? This is getting complicated, but it is such an exciting story!

Author's Response: Thank you - keep guessing/speculating/reading to find out ;o)

Name: KaileeA42 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 10:22 · For: Chapter Four
This story is getting really good. Please update soon!

Name: KaileeA42 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 10:22 · For: Chapter Four
This story is getting really good. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I certainly will. Thanks!

Name: black_ink (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 0:01 · For: Chapter Four
Very good!! Now, its starting to make sense! Aha! It should be exciting to see how their plan turns out!! ~Sara

Author's Response: Thank you ;o)

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/07 18:37 · For: Chapter Three
please update soon!!

Name: Gamma Orionis (Signed) · Date: 08/31/07 23:34 · For: Chapter One
Wow...this is the first Fred & George story I've read...I LOVE the idea of Fred coming back to life, and I'm dying to know why...you have my interest!!!
Poor George. I mean, seriously. I loved that part when Fred said "Forgotten I was dead?" That was hilarious and very raw. It's Puking Pastilles, though, not Puking Pastels (although that looks nice in an alliterative sort of way too!) I'm going to add this to my Favorites!

Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'm so glad you like it! Cheers for pointing out the Puking Pastilles thing, I don't think I would ever have noticed otherwise. Thanks again ;o)

Name: black_ink (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 14:13 · For: Chapter Three
I like where this is going! The whole who-did-it murder along side George coping with the fact that Fred might or might not be back is exciting in its own way!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! ~Sara

Author's Response: Thank you ;o)

Name: black_ink (Signed) · Date: 08/28/07 13:59 · For: Chapter Two
Good chapter!! Sad but still funny. ~Sara

Author's Response: Cheers!

Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 08/27/07 12:48 · For: Chapter Three
I don't usually read mysteries, but I love Fred and George, so I can't wait to see where you go with this. Your writing is absolutely fantastic, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad this story is uniting Fred and George fans who don't usually read mysteries. Updates on the way, don't worry... ;o)

Name: I_solemnly_swear (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 20:06 · For: Chapter Three
Oh, I thought Angelina would be able to see Fred too. I guess George being the only one seems to make it more interesting. I wonder if any of the others in the family can see him. This private eye thing could get interesting too. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you - all will be revealed in good time ;o)

Name: Everlasting (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 16:31 · For: Chapter Three
I love how in-character they all are; you do a great job with it. I can't wait for the next chapter =] it's getting so interesting now

Author's Response: Thank you very much - I was so worried I would get the characterisation wrong because I've never written Gred and Forge before. Thanks ;o)

Name: bonbon_13 (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 15:15 · For: Chapter Three
This is definitely one of my favorite fics to be reading nowadays! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: ic0dk0c00 (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 14:07 · For: Chapter Three
I like this story. It reminds me of Randall and Hopkirk Deceased.

Author's Response: I love that programme. Thanks ;o)

Name: radishearrings3 (Signed) · Date: 08/26/07 13:58 · For: Chapter Three
This is a great story! I love Fred and George stories, and you managed to write one even when one of them is dead! Your writing style is very clear and Fred and George are very in character! Great job! I can't wait 'till the next chapter is up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

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