Reviews For As I Lie There
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/27/08 21:28
Chapter: Sirius: Isn't it Ironic?

I quite like these poems, but I think my favourite is Sirius', There's just something about irony I'm pulled towards as if by an accio charm. Will you be writing one for Dumbledore, Moody, Dobby and Hedwig too?

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/10/07 18:27
Chapter: Sirius: Isn't it Ironic?

I'm crying. That was beautiful. Definitely my favorite out of all of them. The italicized parts were great. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/05/07 19:16
Chapter: Sirius: Isn't it Ironic?

This was one of my favorite parts
"Do you ever wish that you could read your life like a book?
Do you ever pray to an unseen force that fate would intervene?
When things get complicated and unattainable, do you want the ability to read ahead a few chapters to the happy ending? "
Another irony for Sirius-his life was compared to a book, yet he is one of the last person you'd expect to read one. Cheers to Irony!
This is my favorite poem yet! I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 08/30/07 15:06
Chapter: Cedric: Golden Boy

I love how you captured Cedric.
How many poems are you going to write? What other characters are you going to use?
Update soon!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 08/30/07 15:04
Chapter: Lily: I Looked Back

I loved how you change from Sev to Snape when talking before and after him calling Lily a Mudblood.
Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/29/07 6:46
Chapter: Cedric: Golden Boy

Aahh, poor Cedric! So misunderstood. Again, great job. I think so far James' poem is my favorite. Excellent job with this whole thing.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/29/07 6:43
Chapter: Lily: I Looked Back

*sniff* Again, I think I'm going to cry. This was really great. The epitaph was beautiful. Awesome job. *sniff*

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 08/29/07 6:41
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

I think I'm going to cry. *sniff* His epitaph was what really got me. I don't know why you think this is bad; this is excellent. I don't usually read poetry. I think you may have converted me! Great job. :D

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 08/21/07 9:39
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

Aww, that was amazing. The poetry is not bad at all. It was very good. Great job.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/13/07 23:37
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

The poem was all right but I really loved the inscription on James' gravestone. I'm still at the stage where though I know all the ppl in DH have died but am in denial non the less. That inscription made me tear up so good job.=Sammy

Reviewer: Ammortentia92
Date: 08/11/07 8:36
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

tht review tht was written b4 was really by Divster!!!

Reviewer: Ammortentia92
Date: 08/11/07 8:33
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

tht was really pretty !!!!

Reviewer: allura mystique
Date: 08/08/07 12:54
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

Awww... that's really good! It made me sad!

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 08/06/07 22:36
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

I looooved it!

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 08/06/07 11:41
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

That was just so very good. It was very well written. I have no idea why I'm picking sad stories to read. Now this one made me cry. I really liked it from the very beginning to the very end. It was beautiful and quite emotional.

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 08/06/07 8:44
Chapter: James: As I Lie There

Great job! I really loved this poem - even though it did make me incredibly sad - you did a great job writing it, and you did a superb job with ryhming. My favorite part was probably the ending. I loved what you wrote for James' tombstone.
Keep writing! This poem is going on my favorites.

-fawkeshermione

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