Reviewer: SilverDemon
Date: 06/19/10 19:56
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

This story is really sweet! The format you used is very similar to the writing used in Japanese novels, if you have any idea what I'm talking about. It's unique. I really liked it. Great job!

Reviewer: lupin_remus
Date: 08/20/09 13:32
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

damn you for ruining my eye-liner... thank you for bringing that beautiful story into my life... it gave a real closer on my favourite romance (that never really happened), your writing made it real
perfect :)

Reviewer: snole
Date: 01/10/09 0:18
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

this is a really weird style...i don't think i like it...what made you think of it?

Reviewer: Crazyshoe Williams
Date: 12/15/08 7:53
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

i really liked that....well, the formatting was really quite awkward but i ended up appreciating it....lol, but it was hard to get used to. very good, though. i enjoyed this!

~~~Niobe

Reviewer: hebridean black
Date: 07/06/08 20:41
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

oh my!!i cried at the last part!!!! i loved it!! amazing!! so very beautiful it was a bittersweet ending and i loved it!!

Reviewer: sillysimon
Date: 06/30/08 23:26
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Perfect, though the unfinished editing at the top made it very frusterating to read.

Reviewer: peekaboo317
Date: 05/26/08 15:20
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Ouch. My heart.

Reviewer: Flip Carson
Date: 02/29/08 11:47
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

awesome fic keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Flip Carson
Date: 02/29/08 11:43
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

awesome fic keep up the good work!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 01/28/08 18:34
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Wow. That was amazing, as your stuff always is. There was so much emotion in the whole thing--sadness, love, pain, beauty, need, regret--and it was all portrayed wonderfully. I liked how there was a switch between the third and fourth parts. It makes me wonder how you got the idea for those italicized words, but I think it worked very well. It wouldn't have worked in a real book, but anything goes in fanfiction, and I think they really helped the story out. It was lovely, and my only wish is that it could have been longer, because this is the sort of thing I just don't want to end once I start reading it. Amazing job.

Author's Response: The idea for the italicized words? I don't actually know. All I can remember is that those words wanted to be in there and that it wouldn't have worked to use commas instead or incorporate them in any other more conventional way.

It wouldn't have worked in a real book. I disagree. For one thing, this is as real as anything else. For another, I think that what you might be trying to say is less 'couldn't work...real book' and more along the lines of it not working for a novel. I would read a short story like this, published in a 'real' forum/anthology/etc. It would just get too intense and...well, much, for something the length of a novel

Thank you!

Reviewer: Miss_Massacre
Date: 12/27/07 13:28
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

:O Forget my last review. :] I wrote it like halfway through the story. No, now I love it. ^^

Reviewer: Miss_Massacre
Date: 12/27/07 13:09
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

It was... interesting. :] But the whole format thing was annoying. :

Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 12/12/07 18:14
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Wow. Very very good. Thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Emily_Anne
Date: 12/12/07 18:14
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Wow. Very very good. Thumbs up!

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 11/04/07 23:12
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

That was lovely.


Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: TheRadishAlchemist
Date: 10/02/07 23:36
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

That was beautiful! The formar through the beginning was fantastic. I'll admit, I was a bit skeptical at first, but I fell to love it. By the end I missed it!

And the endng was perfect. Well done.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you found that the style flowed; it was a worry of mine that it wouldn't, or that it would be misunderstood. Thank you so much for falling in love with it and finding it perfect.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/25/07 14:25
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

That was really good. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing all of these these! *is touched*

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/22/07 21:35
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Aww! Beautiful ending. I still don't understand the point of the italisized words in parenthasis but over all it really was a wonderful story. I don't think it would have been that original if it weren't for your ending and for that you earn MAJOR bonus points from me. Good job. :)

*Beauty Fades

Author's Response: Well, like the Author's Note says, the italicized words are meant to convey what Remus isn't saying; what he'd like to say or what he's feeling (and can't quite put into words). They kind of add an extra dimension to an inner monologue since half of what's italicized isn't even being recognized by Remus on a conscious level. And that's as best as I can explain it. Thanks for enjoying it and I'm glad you liked the ending!

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/22/07 21:34
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Aww! Beautiful ending. I still don't understand the point of the italisized words in parenthasis but over all it really was a wonderful story. I don't think it would have been that original if it weren't for your ending and for that you earn MAJOR bonus points from me. Good job. :)

*Beauty Fades

Reviewer: dro_maik Black
Date: 09/17/07 1:16
Chapter: Four Times That Sirius Left Returned

Im in tears

Author's Response: I hope that means you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading.

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