wow...i love how you showed this scene in Bellatrix's point of view. very nice!!
Very strong. You depict Bellatrix's devotion as outright- complete and unyielding. Much the same way as she feels about the Dark Arts and killing: it is a must, a necessity. The bold bits really bring the whole thing full circle to the first chapter of DH. I especially like the finishing part, the lines "Kill or be killed. Bellatrix chose kill. And she had completed her mission." in particular. Good job writing something that few people want to tackle.
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Aww! That's so sad that he gave his life for Tonks!! I liked it though, and it was interesting how you thought that they died. :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I always thought Bellatrix would be the one to do it.
This was very good. It gives an explanation that was not provided in the book. As reason for how and why.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's how I like to write most of my fics.