Reviewer: lady magician
Date: 08/03/07 7:16
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Shmergo scores again in the comedy department. Even if it is poetry. I was laughing my head off the whole thing, if I had to choose a fav part I'd highlite it all! I think the parts that made me LOL the most were:

Looking back, did you ever feel any remorse

Other than that drunk night with the lampshade and horse?


LOL! Excuse me, but was that the same night with Aberforth and the goat? Just asking. :-)

i>You went out with a bang-- that's meant literally

Last words were the Death Curse; hey, it beats "Look at me."

You know that really wa a tender moment for Snape, even tho I thought his life was too much like Soap Opera in this Book. But You're so right about it. Hey, it beats "Look at me"...*sigh*

Last but not least at all,

You've been tearing apart our world so many years

That by now, you've got less fans than George has got ears.

"Less fans than George has got ears". Yea, I think I lost it there.


All in all, a most excellent poem by ye with great talent in making people laugh.


P.S. My post-DH poem is a few poems down (they're really coming in these days. I'm like more than hafway down now)...So..erm;..yea...

:-)

Author's Response: Thanks for your great review! I can really imagine Voldemort partying with Aberforth. ^_^ THAT would be a funny story. And yep, at least a boatload of people were looking at Voldemort when he died... although I don't think he was too pleased about that, actually. But the George's ear part was my favourite part of the poem... somehow. I shall surely check out your poem.

Reviewer: Zoheb
Date: 08/03/07 5:03
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

We shall indeed miss the lad. He had such a nose for trouble... *sniff*.

Author's Response: Or rather, he had a place where the nose SHOULD be for trouble.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 08/03/07 4:56
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

You know what? This is ridiculouse and touching at the same time. In other words, it's exactly Schmergo. Wanna know my favourite lines?

Looking back, did you ever feel any remorse
Other than that drunk night with the lampshade and horse

Anyway this is a very fitting tribute to the Dark Lord and we'll all miss making fun of him. May his soul rest in its respected pieces.=Sammy





Author's Response: Yay! I'm ridiculoud and touching! Er... at least... I'm touching my keyboard right now. Hahaha, the lampshade and horse part... my mom told me to take that part out of the poem because it was 'suggestive.' But I'm glad you liked it... and I certainly won't stop making fun of him! I thought he was pretty hilarious in "DH," how totally oblivious he was to everything Harry was up to until right near the end.

Reviewer: boobacat
Date: 08/03/07 4:21
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

hehehe!! I love it a lot!! Is that flaming pop- tart bit a reference to your "Dark Lords Blog"?

Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, the flaming pop tart bit is a reference to "The Dark Lord's Blog," but when I wrote it, it was mainly a reference to my life... because, yanno, I have done the toaster thing, and now my friends and I make toaster-related jokes all the time. ^_^

Reviewer: poshini
Date: 08/03/07 4:01
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

Hahahahaha!!! too gud. kindda funny really. but it was good and i'll surerly miss voldy!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have to admit I will miss Voldemort... I knew he would have to die in this book, but he was such an interestingly insane person.

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 08/03/07 3:55
Chapter: Chapter One and Only!

I see the method to your madness. You wanted an opportunity to pay Voldemort out even worse than you do in the Dark Lord's Blog and the E-Journal Of An Evil Janitor. I have to say, it's worked! Keep the writing (and payouts of old Mouldyshorts) coming!

Author's Response: Ahahaha, actually I was so upset about the deaths in Deathly Hallows that I wanted to write a poem to cheer me up about a death I DIDN'T mind so much! I'm glad you liked it. But between you and me, I don't think there IS a method to my madness.

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