i love it.
mm, it was ok, i did expect somma this in the book.. N ur right about the harry n ginny thing, I never really felt them to be together, nor him n hermione. Harry sure is an odd person to pair.
Neither breathed, but only looked deeply into the other’s eyes, as if taking measure of some ancient touchstone, the singularity of which was nameless and peculiar. Hesitantly, without breaking her gaze, Harry brought Hermione’s lips to his and in the instant before they met, he inhaled her breath and she tasted like she was his.
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before. This is one of my favourite H/Hr fics. It is perfect and I can just see this fitting into canon with Harry and Hermione finding solace and sort of thirst-quenching need within one another.
this was a beautiful story about Harry and Hermione. The story was so power and emotional. I loved it: it was very sweet and I think you wrote the charaters wonderfully. (:
Wow - this is soo amazing!!! I absolutely love it.
beautiful..... dat was da sweetest!!!
Wow - the emotions in this story are so raw, so intriguing. I loved the symmetry of the story - what Hermione did for Harry, Harry did for Hermione. A strong kind of love. Yet, you also showed that not all romances work out, at sometimes you are better off with other people.
Well done and congratulations on your win. :)
this is by far the most beautiful, thought provoking, deep story i've read yet. it just spoke to me about our need for human connections. you are quite simple a brilliant writer.
oh that's so sweet LOVE IT! good job xoxox :)
Not bad, not bad at all. Very sweet.
Please keep going on this story! I'm not usually an angsty person but it's making me cry how these two kept such a secret from each other.
On the contrary to your author's note, I htink you did very well writng the sexual situation - it was just right.
so its a r/hr anyway???
wow this was a fantastic chp!! i totally loved it!!pls continue writin this story ..........good luck!!
Very interesting. You could go on for quite some time like this, with each of them stealing the memory back from the other every few years. I gather this is the end, though? Oh well. Anyway, I really liked the idea of Harry needing to keep the memory because he has so few memories of himself with his loved ones - very poignant.
Much to my surprise, I lked this. You expressed very well how Harry and Hermione could have wound up in this situation and how they might have handled the aftermath. Just one little quibble: Aren't they Obliviating their memories rather than casting a Confundus charm? Confundus just confuses you and muddles you up; Obliviate actually gets rid of a memory.
Author's Response: How right you are!!! This mistake was brought to my attention by another reviewer on another website weeks ago and do you think that I have gone in and fixed it...no. I keep meaning to do it and forgetting (perhaps I'm having problems with my memory!). Thanks for the review!!!
Wait... is this over?
Author's Response: For now I have to say that yes, this story is destined to be a two-shot. The plot bunny for this one has hopped up and nibbled on my toe a few times during the past week, but I think I want to go in a different direction for now. I hope that you enjoyed it.
Once again, you've done a wonderful job, not exactly how I envisioned the ending. But with that being said, I still think you did a great job. 8/10.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I absolutely thrive on people reading my stories. I am very curious to know how you would have envisioned the ending. Did you want Harry and Hermione to be together? I have a confession...I'm not much of a shipper of any kind. To be honest, I did not even know that such a thing existed until I wrote this story and started receiving feedback. Then I started looking around online and was blown away by the loyalty that people have to their "ships". When I write fan fiction (this is my only HPFF, but I have written about other venues), I always try to explore something that I think could have happened within the constructs of canon. I really do not believe for an instant that Harry and Hermione belong with one another, mostly because that is what is canon. I'd be interested to hear your thoughts...thanks again...you made my day!!!!
I really enjoyed this. It was unusual but worked beautifully
Clever and real! (Though Harry is way more emotionally articulate here than in JKR, I think it's necessary to advance the story.) Thanks!