Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 05/15/08 12:47
Chapter: What's in a Name?

great!! I love that the baby has pink hair thats hilarious!!

Author's Response: Officially, it's reddish blond, but to people who like pink.... :D

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 05/15/08 11:26
Chapter: What's in a Name?

Talk about a sensual, sexy cliffie! You're making me blush three shades.
;-}

Great chapter - the "au naturel" comment was priceless. I don't know if I have ever thought of it in those terms either.

Brought a tear to my eye with the propsed name - glad you/they changed it. But seriously, PINK hair - I would tend to agree with Alicia, it would be strawberry-blond. I guess I will give you two point for creative license. ;-) ~wink, wink~

Can't wait til next chapter. TTFN

Author's Response:

Blushing becomes you!

I think boys of all age like to call strawberry blonde hair pink. :D Louis will learn to live with it...or use Uncle George's hexes and 'care packages' LOL.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 05/15/08 8:06
Chapter: What's in a Name?

Love the update and already done with the midnight watch, it was wonderful. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading The Midnight Watch! If they'd added house-elves instead of humans as mods, just think how fast stories would update! :D *goes off into happy place, thinking of it*

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 05/15/08 1:46
Chapter: What's in a Name?

Nice chapter. A Romainian fantasy, intersting concept.

Two honeymoons, now that's just not fair. Can I say that? Even if I'm still considered to young to date (13 turning 14 in November, not that young, but still). 

Keep up the good work and update soon! I was so happy when I came home to find that I had an update!

~ Parchment and Quill



Author's Response:

Thank you for being happy to have an update!

If life was fair, Fred would be alive, (Boo Jo! *have to do that every once in awhile, heh) but since life isn't fair, I'll tell you that isn't their last honeymoon, LOL.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 05/14/08 22:26
Chapter: What's in a Name?

Whew! *fans face with printer paper* That was a racy one. I'm disappointed about the name, although we all know Ms Rowling has stated that George will name his firstborn after his brother. But maybe you have a surprise change coming up regarding Louis' name? Yes? Of course, if you told me, it wouldn't be a surprise, would it? cj

Author's Response:

There will be a few surprises coming up. Can't say if that's one of them. ;)

I read a book about self-editing for fiction writers that used the scene where Rhett sweeps Scarlett up the staircase to show writers don't need explicit sexual or anatomical details, that the effectiveness is evoking the reader's imagination. Thank you for telling me the scene was effective...and for having such a great imagination! ^_~

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 05/14/08 22:18
Chapter: What's in a Name?

Louis Arthur is such a sweet name!! And i would love to have a honeymoon at home... :)

Author's Response: And a house-elf to go with it, doing the cooking, cleaning.....sigh.... :D

Reviewer: HarryPotterFreak44
Date: 05/14/08 21:44
Chapter: Pain and Comfort

write more! please! your story has sucked me in and wont let go!

Author's Response:

Yay!

And if, after reading this story, you discover that I'm the most prolific author on the site (I'll never be the most popular, so I take Jack Sparrow-ish pride in my accomplishment, :D) and decide to scroll down my list and find something else to read, I'll be a happy writer!

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 05/14/08 21:18
Chapter: What's in a Name?

Wow! I never know when this is updated -- but it's always fun to get to read multiple chapters at once! As I've said before, I love how this is progressing. I really like all the romance between George and Alicia -- I myself am not very good at writing fluff for extended periods of time, but I certainly like to read healthy doses of it from others! At the same time, I enjoy that you still have George recovering.

I liked that baby Louis had "pink" hair -- it was funny and a good way to relieve the tension. I can imagine that George is going to be a very good dad ;) I wish I could comment on more, but honestly I liked everything. As I've said before, I think you really have the various characters in-character, which is always important.

Also -- a little Dave Matthews -- always a nice touch! That's my favorite song from them, in fact. Great couple of chapters since I last reviewed; I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for liking romance! Dark and Angst are together, so I hope no one's disappointed to read and discover it's Angst/Romance instead of a Dark!George fic. :D I think mixing fluff in with humor and sadness works best...keeps it from giving readers stomachaches, or putting them into diabetic comas. You can't review if you're in hospital! ;)

George will be a good dad. He just doesn't know it yet.

I'm glad you like the musical touch. Next chapter put John Mayer to mind, and the one after that Santana, and after that, The Cure.  Who know, by the time the story's done I might burn a CD and call it the For Bitter or for Worse Soundtrack, LOL.

Reviewer: Nakita
Date: 05/14/08 21:18
Chapter: What's in a Name?

That was wonderful!! I can't wait for the wedding.

Author's Response: Not long to wait! I hope you'll think it very George. :D

Reviewer: HellFromPeeves
Date: 05/14/08 20:17
Chapter: What's in a Name?

I've been reading this story for a long time, and figured it was time to leave a review. This is by far my favorite story I have read on Mugglenet Fanfiction. =D Keep up the amazing work.

And on a side note, it amuses me that one of the chapters in my main story is also titled "What's In A Name?". xD

Author's Response:

Shakespeare lovers unite! :)

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review! I really appreciate it...and not just 'cause you have such good taste in chapter titles. ;)

Reviewer: emLILYEVANS
Date: 05/11/08 18:08
Chapter: Celebrations

i love this story awsomeness

Author's Response: I'm glad the site is getting back to normal so I can update. Thank you for waiting for each chapter!

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/11/08 9:13
Chapter: Celebrations

About the last review I left: I am incredibly glad that I'm back as well, and yes, I did win the match against the boy in lunch that wins every arm-wrestling match he's ever played. I lost within 3 seconds to three of my friends, but beat this guy. And I dunno if I rated this, but 100000000000000/10 for the entire story! {Becca}

Author's Response:

Good on you for arm-wrestling prowess! Girl Power! :D

Thank you so much for the compliment!

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 05/10/08 23:27
Chapter: Celebrations

loved it! especially the idea of the weasleys line dancing!

Author's Response: Arthur's so Muggle-loving, I can see him getting disco fever and passing it on to the kids...whether they really wanted to learn or not, heehee.

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 05/10/08 17:39
Chapter: Celebrations

Ooooo. Great chapter! I've been following this story ever since Chapter 12 was up (i only started it then because i was grounded for a little predicament that involved arm-wrestling in lunch) and I only just remembered to review. Great job, 10/10. {Becca}

Author's Response:

Did you win the match? :D

I'm sorry you were grounded, but yay! you're back!

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 05/10/08 9:47
Chapter: Celebrations

Hey there. I'm a new reader! But I love your story! It's ingenious! Really well written & realistic!
I know you haven't u[dated in a while, I really wish you do so soon, though!
Cheers!

Author's Response: Hola! Thank you so much for reading my story! I know some of the bigger categories have bigger waits, so I try not to pout about waiting, but if I had magic powers...:D

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 05/09/08 17:57
Chapter: Celebrations

Love the inclusion of George's emotions after the announcement of the baby. Also greatly enjoyed the last line. I actually didn't see it coming. I figured Bill sensed George's uncomfortable feelings and wished to speak with him about them. Well done. Next chapter please. cj

Author's Response: I hope you'll enjoy the next few 'surprises' just as much, and I'm with you about fast updates! :)

Reviewer: Vbird
Date: 05/08/08 21:01
Chapter: Celebrations

i'm sorry but, about time! but it was a good chapter. I was wondering how old fred would be her? and i understand it takes time to write a hole chapter but im not one to keep quiet about how i feel.

Author's Response: The site upgrade threw an ugly arsed spanner into my updating schedule! I'm glad you want faster updates...I'd be very sad and pout if you didn't care. :D

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 05/07/08 21:26
Chapter: Celebrations

I have to admit the baby's name made me teary.

Author's Response: Wait until next chapter.... ^_~

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 05/07/08 18:20
Chapter: Celebrations

Post Epilogue Revelations Disregarded indeed. Because if we went completely be canon, this would be Angelina not Alicia who's going to marry George. Really don't care though.

I must say that I am most certainly enjoying this story and it's continuation would be most appreiative.

Of course, if you would like to see me turn out like Winky you wouldn't be so kind, but that's totally your choice.

Now, I think George would become an excellent godfather, despite is predictions. But hey, that's me.

Loved it. Love the story and Alicia now (I must admit to not really caring about her but now do) . Keep up the good work.

10/10

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response:

I couldn't write George/Angelina because it's a match made in therapy. So unhealthy on so many levels, I wish Jo had left all the loose ends of the series up to reader imagination. There's a thing called literary canon. I'm a great believer in it, and that it's the only *true* canon. Not many agree with me....LOL

Writers who don't complete stories live with guilt I don't want to imagine, so I'll happily complete the story, although the thought of you swaying with Caper, swigging Butterbeer in between bites of chocolate is very grin-worthy!

I agree with you about George, but he doesn't see the big picture like we do. ;) As for Alicia, thank you so much! She's almost an OFC because her character is barely more than a name in the books. There's no description, only a few mentions, no dialogue, even. (I'm 99% percent sure) George is the one readers already love, while she's a virtual stranger at the beginning of the story. For you to care about her now makes so happy! (Did I say thank you? :)

Reviewer: fightingokra4life
Date: 05/07/08 17:56
Chapter: Celebrations

Awe yay a baby! And alicia's dress sounds absolutely gorgeous!

Author's Response:

Wait until you 'see' Louis..... :D

Thank you! All wedding dresses should be gorgeous, and designers that create ugly ones fined severely!

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