Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 5:13
Chapter: Friends and Family

Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 4:54
Chapter: Family and Friends

So much in one chapter. YAY. I'm howling at the fact that George was photograped wearing a Harpies tee. LOL. Also glad to hear something about Ron and Hermione. If Ron has a summer job at WWW I guess we can expect Harry to pop n from time to time. Nice but not all that necessary. After I finish this story I will go chase down your other FF's. Hopefully, I'll find an AU in which Fred is still alive and he finds romance too. Wonderful job.

Author's Response: Sadly, I've never been able to write an AU about Fred or find a way to bring Sirius back from behind the veil. :(

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 22:43
Chapter: Say Anything

Your hilarity, wit and imagination totally shine through in your writing. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Sharon, you had me at hilarity. :D

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 22:31
Chapter: About a Girl

Great.. I have to learn some more adjectives. LOL

Author's Response: Your adjectives are s'wonderful and s'awful nice!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 22:24
Chapter: About a Boy

Short but intriging.(sp) Do I sense a rendezvous coming up between Kingsley and Delila? George thought the "M" word. WooHoo.

Author's Response: I really wanted to do a Kingsley/Delila one shot, but I never got around to it, sigh.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 22:15
Chapter: He Said, She Said

Important to me that both George and Blaise are men who don't let friends or friendships define the way they think or what they should believe. Nice one.

Author's Response:

It makes them men . . . and reminds me of the Kipling poem If.

if neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you,
If all men count with you, but none too much

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 21:58
Chapter: More Than a Dream

I say let the writer write....whichever way you take this story will be amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you for your trust. :)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 21:41
Chapter: Come Talk to Me

That went well. George apologizing to Alicia. Blaise and George not beating each other to death....You are a very creative and intuitive writer. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Blaise is taller and more muscular. George would have to be in a blind rage to throw a punch, heh. Thanks!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 21:19
Chapter: Baby Blues

Your Bill timeline makes omplete sense. As always enjoying the A/N as much as the story. How about that. A Sytherin boyfriend. You go Angelina. Now lets see how George can make this right.

Author's Response: Angelina deserves to be happy, I just can't see it happening with George. In my canon Rose and Scorpius story, I have them divorcing because they love each other but not in the right way. Jo might say one day that they were happy ever after until death did them part, but until then, my view is as good as anyone else's. ^_~

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 21:02
Chapter: Trick or Treat

Calm down George. Alicia didn't do it on purpose. Take a deep breath and exhale. Nice one.

Author's Response: George calms down . . . eventually . . . . :P

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 20:40
Chapter: Sour Cherries

The illusion was a master stroke. Alicia would be excellent as George's marketing rep. Veela Fleur has taken it down a notch or two. I like her character here. And a big Oh boy to the pregnancy part. Tells me one thing. George was having all that much sex if the contraceptive potion sat so long it expired.

Author's Response: I didn't like Fleur in the books, so I had to find a way to identify with her character and change that. Thank you for liking the way I write her! George was working too hard on the shop to work on his moves with the ladies :D.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 20:16
Chapter: Blue Notes

Very nice.

Author's Response: Ta, thanks!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 20:03
Chapter: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?

Yes. Now this is a path I want to follow. I like the fact that george has a house elf helping him out. On several occassions I have wondered why no author has written about house elves and how they're born and raised and where they stay until they are old enough to serve a master. I know. I'm weird. Admire the way George and Alicia's entanglement is leading to a realtionship....Kudos.

Author's Response: House elves just aren't as sexy as humans, :D, so they're taken for granted. You're not weird, you have a writer's brain. ;)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 19:48
Chapter: Something to Talk About

I love drama.

Author's Response: I'm glad, because if you hated it, I'd be losing a reader. :D

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 19:34
Chapter: Breaking the Habit

I am having as much fun reading your Authors Notes as I am reading the story. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for saying that!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 19:21
Chapter: Motherly Love

I may be in the minority here but I can understand the emotions that George is going through. I cannot sanction the way he is treating Alicia.though. Great story. Great writing.

Author's Response: George is definitely acting out instead of expressing his feelings in healthy ways!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 19:08
Chapter: Dance with Me


Author's Response: Smiles are my favorite (couldn't resist the Elf quote, heh).

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 18:58
Chapter: A Family Affair

You and your A/N rock.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading the author notes! Not everyone does, although of course I think they should, lol.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 18:28
Chapter: Making Love Instead of Misery

Sounds to me like Alicia is a girl who will be able to hold her own. I think she'll sneak up on Georgie.......Go Alicia. Work some magic.

Author's Response: Alicia's a softie, but she's got spunk, which is a good combination for George. ;)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/17/11 18:14
Chapter: The Morning After

Great chapter. A little bit of suffering. A little bit of sexy. Well written.

Author's Response: Thanks! You've described life as many people know it. :D

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