The fire between them, even when she's with child, is uncanny. But that's okay. You've always been amazing at things like that. >.> I'm still surprised, though. :)
It's normal, really. Women don't stop being hot to their men during pregnancy. Most guys are proud of creating that belly bulge, and still get turned on, not off.
WHAT? My mouth's hanging open and I'm about to explode. What? George might flip, and I might flip, but George's whacky inner-Fred will probably be laughing, happy at that--or consoling his freaking-out twin brother. I'm kinda pissed at Bill for that one, though. Even if it
Author's Response: Don't explode! You'd be stuck in hospital, unable to read, awful all round!
I'm so glad Fleur's kid didn't die. I was going to have a heart attack! God you inflict so much emotion. That sounded off.
Author's Response: Thank you for being an emotional person who can feel for the characters!
First rule: Jealous, territorial boyfriend? NEWSFLASH. Don't go eat lunch with an ex! And second rule: Never, ever, never ever ever EVER ask your fiance if her ex-boyfriend has seen her naked. XD God I should be a therapist to these people.
Heheh sorry you're awesome stories get me so intense
Author's Response: LOL at being a therapist. Sometimes people have to learn things the hard way. :D
This just seemed eerily similar to the Spain thing, but that may be because a) I'm slightly obsessed with that other story, and b) I think Boy!Blaise likes dragging his girlfriend off to romantic getaways with friends as much as Girl!Blaise did. ;) That's okay. I still love this whole damn thing. *giggles* Hereditary speech impediment? Heheh. Several parts I read aloud to my brother, if I thought they were especially funny, but I'm not very comfortable with him to expression anything--ah--well, like, sex and stuff. ;D I usually like Oliver, too--*giggle*nottosayithinkhe'shotoranything--but, because I know he's with Alicia and because I know it's probably nothing; I want to break him in half.
Raging--surge of....in...tense loove for Blaise Zabini! Sorry I just can barely speak :) I'm so happy and cheery and YAY CHRISTMAS! Hahaha. I love this story! *hugs everything/everyone*
At the word terrifying, my hopeful expression just melted. It was pretty pitiful. Then I gasped when she went all "why" on me and I was just like, "Don't be ruinin' my moment, biatch!" over and over and over. And then she says, "Marriage is a lifelong commitment" and I just start shouting, "You're ruining it! You are--ruining--it!" These things just make me so dramatic XD I spent the entire chapter smiling, laughing, talking merrily to the computer screen, and every time somebody said "Congratulations," "engaged," or "ring," I would punch the air with my first and shout "YES!" Haha.
Author's Response: Thank you for making me spend the entire time reading your review smiling!
I take back the no-squeeing part. I was. And then I got up, jumped up and down, then spun around in my chair and squealed, "Merry Christmas!" And giggled like an idiot.
Author's Response: Spinning around in chairs is fun. Thank you for the compliment!
Gasping, more like. If it wasn't midnight I WOULD scream. I jumped out of my chair as it is.
Author's Response: Don't scream, people might come rushing into the room and keep you from reading more! :D
WHAT? She would say no? It's not just me gaping, right? Angelina just dropped dead too, right? Tell me right. Oh jeez. I'm way into this.
Author's Response: Yay for you being into it! She says she'd say no because she's thinking he'd make it a casual thing...but he won't...
*lightly* Oh, did they never say I love you before? Well, that's fun to hear it in her sleep then. XD If that's their future, then I worry for them. Bleh. Well I still love the whole thing. But you know.
Author's Response: That's what she fears what will happen in the future, and no L word has been spoken between them.
It was weird. This chapter made my voice shake and made me laugh, made me gasp and smile
Author's Response: Just the reactions a writer wants! :)
SWEET! I'm excited! Is that bad? Alicia sure as hell seems upset. Guess Fleur knows what she's talking about when she tells people they look pregnant. *sighs* George is going to go round the twist, won't he?
Fleur meant for herself, not Alicia, but it was foreshadowing. :D George is going to be mad, but it won't be at Alicia.
I don't blame him. I'd kill someone if I only sort of liked them and they tried to replace my best friend like that, even if it wasn't much. *sighs* George's life is so complicated. *hug*
Author's Response: George's life is about to get even more complicated...and it's good for him!
There were several parts where I just burst out laughing. My family probably thinks I'm insane XD I'm okay with that. Oh my god! I love the words that come out of hopelessly confused people's mouths! And the reactions it inspires in nearby people.
Author's Response: Yay for bursting out laughing and loving words!
People are kind of funny sometimes. Watching all this from the outside just makes me laugh, even when I shouldn't. And even when I feel bad for George and Fleur and Bill and Alicia and everyone else, I still find what comes out of their mouths amusing XD
Author's Response: I've gone through times of grief and even in the darkest times funny stuff happens. In fiction, too, angst without romance and humor to lighten it sucks, lol.
Bitch! *gasps* Oh my god, is it just me or is this new George a complete bitch?! Telling Percy he wants him dead and pissing himself over with firewhiskey every night, I want to slap the little bastard! I mean, well yeah, he deserves the chance to bitch about it for at least a year, but that doesn't make my violent desires burn out any faster.
But he's grieving and she's desperate and ohmygod I just want to hug everybody now. Ahh! The emotions you bring out in me.
Author's Response: If George wasn't bitter and angry and determined to keep the world at arm's length, he wouldn't be grieving...and he wouldn't have any need to learn and grow and earn a happy ending. ;)
'That was good, but I wish there was a little more of it' ;)
Author's Response: I love you, man...woman... :D
Having only recently found this story & never having left a review before I'm compelled to write & say what a moving, beautiful, heart rending story you have written. I only hope you get this review.
Author's Response: I got it, and loved it, and appreciate it so much! Thank you!
This is not my usual my HP fanfiction sort of reading, but once I started the first chapter I could not stop. Well written - good story.
I heart you for reading a story that isn't your usual reading!
I have to confess, though, that every time I see your pen name, I have this knee jerk, oh-my-heck-it's-DAD! reaction and have to remind myself (in Bill Murray from Groundhog Day fashion) that you're a dad, not the dad, LOL.