Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/18/11 10:03
Chapter: Baby Love

This was an amazing story! I was so worried that George was going to screw things up with Alicia, but I loved the happy ending. You write beautifully, even though I cried almost every chapter because of Fred. I love your story, though. Little Fred sounds so freaking adorable. Once again, amazing story. If there were a rating box, I'd give it a hundred out of ten!

Author's Response: Thank you for being the a wonderfully sensitive reader who cries for characters and encourages writers with your reviews! I heart you for that. <3

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/18/11 9:32
Chapter: A Time to Laugh, a Time to Weep

Okay, little Teddy Lupin touching the statue and saying, "Mama" was harder than the constant reminders of Fred's death. I seriously want to ask JK Rowling how she got through killing off all those good characters. I can't do it. I tried to kill of a main character in a one-shot, and I ended up adding another chapter where he came back explaining that he had faked his death!

Author's Response: I don't think it's a good idea for me to ever be in the same room as JK. I might pull a Misery and make her rewrite the battle so Tonks and Remus live. :P It is hard to kill off characters you care about. I've only done it a couple of times, and I cried (and later wrote AU stories where they lived ^_^).

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/18/11 8:36
Chapter: Pictures of You

This chapter was totally Wicked... every pun intended! I'm glad this is a long story because it's really good. I hate it when the good ones end quickly!

Author's Response: Huzzah for puns, and readers like you who appreciate them. :) I feel the same way.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/18/11 6:46
Chapter: Hey Jealousy

I like that George actually goes to his family for advice now. He just needs to get over his jealousy issues, and he'll be almost perfect!

Author's Response: George is like the rest of us, too human to truly be perfect, but as long as Alicia thinks he's perfect for her, I don't think he'll have self-esteem issues. ;) I could see it taking George time to let his family be there for him when he was used to turning to Fred for advice.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/17/11 21:03
Chapter: Reality Bites

It's the jealousy thing again. It seriously makes me nervous. It's taking all of my self-control not to skip ahead and make sure everything's going to be okay. Lucky for my self-control, I'm going to have to call it a night before I fall out of my chair. I'll finish this tomorrow, though. You have an excellent story here. I can hardly wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you, and yay for you having self control! I've ruined books flipping to the end to find out who done it, etc. I spend the rest of the book picking out the foreshadowing instead of enjoying it. :D

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/17/11 20:05
Chapter: In the Cards

:) Beautiful! This is such an amazing story! It's nice to see all the families coming together for Christmas. It's amazing that George and Alicia are engaged. I will admit, though. His bouts of jealousy worry me. I keep thinking it might be foreshadowing to an unhappy ending.

By the way, yes, I did watch DH part 2 in a crowded theatre. I also bawled like a baby. It was so hard to just watch them die. I definitely don't envy the moment JK Rowling realized she was going to kill them off. I wonder if she cried, too.

Author's Response:

I read she got a hotel room and drank champagne and cried when she killed Fred off, but I didn't hear about her getting teary over any of the others.

George hasn't worked through all his issues, that's certain!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/17/11 19:25
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Awwww... That was freaking adorable! I almost cried; which usually only happens when I'm reminded of Fred's death. (I grew up reading Harry Potter, so the characters are kinda like family. I cry every time one of them dies.)

Author's Response: Thank you! Did you watch part 2 of DH in a crowded theater? Did it make you teary? I felt numb, and I really wish they'd kept to canon with Fred's death. Sigh.

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/17/11 17:42
Chapter: Say Anything

My computer had a slight loading glitch which posted the double review. By the way, you have a twin? So, cool. I always wanted a twin.

Anyhoo, amazing chapter. I definitely did not see Mrs. Weasley reacting so well. I liked the security question, too. It was hilarious! Well, I'm off to read more!

Author's Response:

What? A glitch? I was hoping you'd double clicked because you were doubly enthusiastic about the chapter. :D

Yes, I have a twin, and he's much taller than me, but I'm faster. 

I think Molly had a shift in priorities and attitude after the battle. If she didn't, I don't ever want to hear about it, because I like her this way, heh. 

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/17/11 15:28
Chapter: Making Love Instead of Misery

Yep, kissed and sent home. I do feel sorry for George, though. I could not imagine losing a twin... not someone who was my partner in crime all my life.

Author's Response: Double review means another chance to say Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 09/17/11 15:28
Chapter: Making Love Instead of Misery

Yep, kissed and sent home. I do feel sorry for George, though. I could not imagine losing a twin... not someone who was my partner in crime all my life.

Author's Response: Me either, even though my twin wasn't a partner in crime. He would've told on me, heh.

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 05/04/11 17:49
Chapter: Baby Blues

i like blaise he is a snobby edward cullen yes i like both serieses!!!!

Author's Response: I've never thought of him like that. I'd love you to read Chasing Angelina and see if you still think there's a resemblance. :)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/19/11 23:20
Chapter: Baby Love

SIGH! "That was good, but I wish there was a little more of it" Excellent story. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and giving me a chance to remember why I loved writing it so much! I can only hope you'll find something else of mine to read. ^_^

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 18:50
Chapter: Celebrations

Louis Frederick. Has a nice ring. I'm hoping when George sees little Louis some more of the bitterness over Fred's death will diminish.

Author's Response: Time does help, hard as that is to believe (or accept) at the time of bereavement. I'm sure Louis will be one of his favorite nephews. :)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 16:39
Chapter: Reality Bites

Our George doesn't have a jealous bone in his body....right? The wedding is going to be a huge affair. That is, if it's still on after George rips Oliver a new one. Can't wait to read.

Author's Response: George is human, he's got some jealousy issues to work out. Builds character. :D

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 15:50
Chapter: Interlude

Absolutely brilliant come around. Blaise, I think he's growing on me. (this story only). Please don't make her wear Auntie Muriel's tiara. LOL. Are we going to get a curveball? Either Fleur or Alicia must be carrying twins no matter what the medwitch says....

Author's Response:

I have a three part story, Chasing Angelina, based on this one that I think you'd like. Blaise is a gentleman and a Slytherin. :D

Yes on the curveball and no on twins, heh. 

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 15:22
Chapter: In the Cards

Nicely done author. Nicely done.

Author's Response: *bows*

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 14:55
Chapter: Christmas

I wish that George had accompanied Alicia to see her mom. George could have given Mrs Spinnett the old Weasley charm. Actually, Mrs Spinnett may be reacting more to being alone than to Alicia leaving to start a family. She'll come around. What's up with P&P? I think when Percy starts really feeling the love from his family he'll be able to convince Penelope that he really cares. That's my take on it....LOL.

Author's Response: I like your take on things. It might not be right, :D, but it's still very sound thinking!

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 14:23
Chapter: Christmas Eve

Wonderful. George and Percy may have turned a corner in their relationship. George and Alicia's relationship is being firmly cemented in time and George has made some strides in coming to terms about Fred's death.. IMO, low key chapter with very important portents. Bravo.

Author's Response: I like your opinion very much. Thank you for sharing it! ^_^

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 14:00
Chapter: It's Beginning to Look a Lot Like Christmas

A little filler never hurt anyone. Not really all that much going on. It's getting pretty familiar as to how George feels about anyone touching Fred's belongings.

Author's Response: Letting go of belongings can seem like letting go of the person's memory. I'll admit to keeping a few things around for sentimental reasons. :)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 03/18/11 6:36
Chapter: Home for the Holidays

Years late and wrong time of year but Happy Holidays anyway.Kerichi. This stoy is fascinating. Love it. I'm glad I get to read it in its entirety all at once.

Author's Response:

I keep my Christmas lights on
On my front porch all year long

Actually, I don't, but the lines from Redneck Woman popped into mind. :D Happy holidays!

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