I've always wanted to know exactly what happened, and this is so great it should be in the actually books. Good job!
I really liked this!
I especially loved the Patronus at the end :)
Aw that was so sweet of you to wrote what shoulve been writen about their deaths in stead of a on line death but that was so sweet
I absolutely love your story. Everything was perfect, but you had one mistake. Tonks is Bellatrix's niece, not her cousin.
that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean i actually cried when tonks and remus both died and the ending with the potronus was beuatiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job!!!
Yes, you are quite good =P I liked this. I kinda of read it off and on while chatting on MSN, so I dont think it was quite tear-jerking as it should have been (I cry quite easily at sad stories). But it was sad. I was very upset when both Remus and Tonks died. I loved how Tonks's patronus was the one to inform Andromeda of the deaths. Quite sad, beautifully written. Keep up the good work.
Oh sad. My two favorites are gone. At least they went together and Teddy had people that loved him as he grew up. And let me say, that you are good. At least this story gives them a meaningfull death. Deathly Hallows just said that they died. Even Hedwig got a death scene but my Remus doesn't? How fair is that?!
THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah man, you beat me to it! I just submitted my version of how this happened a few days ago. Although I do have to say that mine differs greatly from yours.
This was really good, but I felt like it moved a little fast. Maybe I just skipped a paragraph by accident. I really liked this story though. And I wish they hadn't died. :(
I choked up quite a bit towards the end of the book, and you had me choking up here too.
I agree that Remus AND Tonks shouldn’t have died, but since they did, I am grateful you put in the Patronus to Andromeda. I appreciated the ‘mood’ Tonks found herself in when Remus died, and you captured it beautifully.
Having the extra missing moments, that you do, adds so much to the experience of re-reading the books. Which I do quite often. Now when I read them, I have your versions of the forgotten details in my head to fill in the blanks. You do such a great job with them.
I hope you will continue to give us your missing moment versions, because as I have said before, they would fit flawlessly into the books. Thanks for this one, and see you soon at chapter two of mine or chapter eight of yours.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it; I got the idea almost as soon as I read that section of the book and had to write it. And don't worry, I found lots and lots of missing moments in DH...I'm thinking of doing a couple on Ginny, Luna, and Neville when I get the time. I'm looking forward to your next chapter! And I'm working on mine, but I've got writer's block at the moment...bleh. But I am working on it, I promise!
