I think that this is a rather intriguing story. You have done a good job at capturing my interest. I hope that you don’t make it get too weird. I think that it would also be good to include some of the characters that us Harry Potter fans already know. Maybe not as a main character but at least mention them. I am asuming that you will do that later on.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like the story so far and find it intriguing. The cannon characters will appear later on, and some will have major roles. I hope you'll like the rest of the story! :)
I think you could've been a bit more creative and not stolen so much from Voldy's backround. I can understand echoing things, like Teddy Lupin and Harry Potter, but that wen't a little too far.
Still good, though. I kinda wish you had included more of the characters we already know, such as Lily, Albus, James, Hugo, Rose, and maybe even Teddy Lupin. It would've been nice if you had set the story just a pinch closer to now, then you would've been able to incorperate familiar characters.
That's just my opinion.
Author's Response: There is actually a very good reason why Alexander's background is so similar to Voldemort's, and it will be revealed in a later chapter. Echoing background would not have been enough for what I have planned. So, the similarity was intentional, and I don't appreciate being accused of stealing. On the subject of using cannon characters, when writing post-Hogwarts stories, I prefer to write them in the far future. I have a fic on another website that is set 150 years after the events of Harry Potter. I personally feel that setting the fics further into the future gives me more freedom in my plot. That's just my personal preference, though. I'm glad you thought it was still good.
Oooh, nice start, with the ghost story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ghost story! I had been wondering if that was going to work, but I guess it did. Thanks for the review.
Interesting start to a good story.....hope the next chapter is equally good.....
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the start, I wanted to start it off in an unusual way, and I'm glad it worked. Now I've got a high standard to live up to, I guess. I hope the next chapter is equally good as well.
